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Noice, different, unusual...
I am constantly amazed by your stories - your prolific output, the quality of the presentation, and the wide range of settings/topics - so I look forward to seeing your latest in the "new" section each day when I log-in. Appreciated!
Kakkoii!
I've loved every story of yours that I've read so far and this is an almost delicate tale compared to some. It was beautifully and sensually described and if I have one small criticism it was probably that it is too short. The end felt rushed after that delicious build up... I need more!! *sobs*
xx.Sadie
Beautiful erotic melody
The language in your story flows like music, gentle and mesmerizing as it leads the reader to the final climax. Beautiful imagery of opulence and a young mans mixed emotions.
good story !
i wish it was longer though!
Thank you!
Elegant, poetic, gently but powerfully erotic
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