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A short story
I did enjoy it and got to the cock in hand stage after a slowish start. There were no problems with the spelling and grammar side because I was enjoying the process of reading. A good sexy story that needed a bit more for me and you to get the final star.
Excellent!
It's great to see the FemDom genre alive and well here on Literotica.
This story is a great example of our kink.
Very hot! Please write more.
A good fem domme tale
Really enjoyed this tale. well concieved and well written.
I generally agree with the previous comments
This was a fairly well done story.
Loving fem dom stories tend to be pretty rare. Even though there's the hint at possible extracurricular activity on the wife/mistress's part, it remains that.
Like an earlier commentator noted, this couple's antics don't get overly extreme. It seems like the mistresses in many stories of this type get off on the abject humiliation of their subs and tend to be written as overly cruel. This was not. Granted, it's a very short story.
I used the word "generally" in my agrement with some of the earlier commentators, and "fairly well done" in my description of the story overall. This was for two reasons: one was - in particular - the misspelling of the word "straightened." I believe the spelling that appeared in the story was "straitened." A small thing, really, but the thing that I was unable to ignore was the lack of proper dialog. These people talk to one another, but it's all smashed into the paragraph proper, rather than denoting it in dialog form. I understand that dialog isn't easy, but you've got it in there. It should read as such.
Next story (you are planning on continuing this writing lark, aren't you?), write the dialog the way it's supposed to be, please. It'll make your work that much more professional looking, and will read more naturally
Overall, a pretty good start. Let's see some more.
my wife masturbates me often. first she ignores my tiny 3in dick and shoves her fingers into me like I have a cunt. not my ass but between my balls or above my dick. I soon start moaning and she stops and spanks my balls so hard. after diong this for about 30 min. I am stricking my legs up and wide and jerking in an uncontrolable vaginal orgazim. I scream out my joy as I cum over and over without shooting any cum. She calls me her little girl. If I am good she will then rub my dick and my little clit that is just under my dicks head untill I shoot off like a man. If I have not been good then she stops after giving me my vaginal orgazims. My balls are full of cum but it stays there and I have to go to sleep without tasting my prize. I don't realy mind because the girl climaxes are so nice and I don't want to lose them. I suggest you get your wife to do this to you. I ask my wife to vidio her doing me so we can show others this great way for a man to expieriance being a girl. I for one like the vaginal rub climax better than the best plane old jack off and spurt. And the more vocal the better, why do so many guys lay there like mute logs, let the noise out guys
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I love panty wanking. Had a great one while reading your story
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