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by Anonymous12/22/06

Nice Start

Ok, you got a good start on the story. I look forward to the next installment.

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by Anonymous12/23/06

Sorry, I saw nothing to indicate this was.........

the opening paragraph overly extended for a story. My guess is this goes in the autobiography nonerotic fictional category. She was hired into a relatively high position in a law firm without meeting the brains of the outfit. She is totally self absorbed, alienated, jealous of brothers girlfriend, and hates her parents for "forcing" her to go into law. OK what is new here, nothing. What is erotic here, nothing. What is loving here, nothing. What is horror here, nothing. We have a little girl who complete a law degree and from the wording here her bar exams, who went on a three year wander around the world to find herself and obviously didnt. Mental age about three. I gave you a 25 for the vocabulary used, zero on everything else.

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