All Comments on 'Pool Party'

I love this story - it´s so hot. Can´t wait for the next chapter. Please continue !

I'm hard as a rock.

I'm not sure why these lit crit fools are jost getting off!

mmm-mmmmmmmmmmmm i'm so wet after reading this

Once again your story is unbelievable. I can see the kids doing it, they may have been at it for years. But Mom should have taken some convincing. Watching them two or three times before joining in. Maybe being seduced by her daughter while giving her "the talk" about how she shouldn't, but if she must then use protection, etc. But the daughter shows mom there is nothing wrong with it. and after a few good orgasms, sonny comes in.

So many errors. Just look at the bottom line. Why bother to post a story if you can't be bothered to make it coherent?

instead of forcing the history let it slide

My cock got so hard. Loved it

Simple and effective. Now I have a cock I need to relieve.

Great story looking forward to reading more

Son has got to nail first his Mom and then his sister in chapter 2 ?

Good story but GET AN EDITOR!!

Hope he got his mother and sister knocked up with his kid in each of them