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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
This was such a great story until.................

you fucked it up with the fingers in the ass stuff

Why do you guys do that? Why don't you put it under ANAL?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Stuid comment, dont you know dyke shit

To previous commentor, what the fuck d you think, punk? Dykes like to finger ech other's asshole and licka nd suck it too. Or do you wanna read about lesbians that just kiss the pussy and that's it. Then you should buy a romance novel, jerk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Beautiful

Perfectly paced, and delicate, and sweet, and it made me hunger for more. I loved everything in it. (Ignore the idiots.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great story!

Very erotic buil up. Need more!

bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
A New Love

I love the shower scene at they Y i hope your continung with another chapter i would love to read the rest of the story.

pat

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
oh god........

that was GREAT! i think i need a shower now...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
fuck yea

sexy tender swimmers are my bag, baby.

sweetescapesweetescapeover 15 years ago
SEXY..

Very well put together, with the whole plot and sex scene. I think it would have come out better though, if you would have made the sex scene longer or make Larissa lick her pussy also.

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