by LoveLorelei
you fucked it up with the fingers in the ass stuff
Why do you guys do that? Why don't you put it under ANAL?
To previous commentor, what the fuck d you think, punk? Dykes like to finger ech other's asshole and licka nd suck it too. Or do you wanna read about lesbians that just kiss the pussy and that's it. Then you should buy a romance novel, jerk.
Perfectly paced, and delicate, and sweet, and it made me hunger for more. I loved everything in it. (Ignore the idiots.)
I love the shower scene at they Y i hope your continung with another chapter i would love to read the rest of the story.
pat
Atlanta,Ga
Very well put together, with the whole plot and sex scene. I think it would have come out better though, if you would have made the sex scene longer or make Larissa lick her pussy also.