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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/24/06

Loved it!

Great story! I enjoyed every word. I like your writing style and the way you develop the scene. Keep it up!

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by Anonymous12/24/06

Keep writing

I loved your story. you should continue. I also like your style.

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by Anonymous12/24/06

Nick, Sean?

Great story, love your writing. Did she call him Sean? That through me off. "Sean I need your cock, sweety" Poor Nick.

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by Lesly Sloan12/24/06

Fine way to start

Let's see more of this promissng story!

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by duke11112/24/06

More please.

Give us some more of this story.

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by Anonymous12/24/06

Good stuff

Enjoyable! I wonder what the next encounter was like.

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by Anonymous12/24/06

good stuff

More please; you write very well

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by werdsmith12/24/06

very nice

very nice, I enjoyed the story a lot.

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by SEVERUSMAX12/25/06

This will be mentioned on the AH.

There were punctuation and capitalization errors, not to mention long paragraphs, but they were not enough to change the fact that this was one of the hottest anal sex stories I've read in a while! The writer really did more than give me an idea of what the protagonists and wanted to do. He made ME want to fuck Julia's tight ass, even though I know that she doesn't exist! I give it a 5 for sure. I also liked that she didn't beat around the bush. She knew that he wanted her ass and she decided to thank him for FINALLY taking the initiative to get it. Overall, I'm quite impressed with this tale of hot buggery.

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by Anonymous12/25/06

Bullshit

The queers will suck this piss-poor trash.

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by scorpiocop01/15/07

Loved it

Great story. Loved it.

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by Anonymous07/31/10

name?

how come at one point the girl calls him sean? i thought his name was nick..

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by NaughtyNoelle10/06/13

This was fantastic, I loved it very much. Keep up the great work.

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