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by duddle14612/20/06

Peaceful.

A quaint picture ~ sitting alone with the sky still dark ~ having that first cup of coffee. Realistic and endearing.

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by LeBroz12/20/06

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The kind of poem that's so easy to read at 6 in the morning with that coffee;

It's clear, clean and direct,
Pleasingly easy on a mind still filled with webs,
Readying it for its later work on more somber words.

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by LeBroz12/20/06

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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