Mistaken Thoughts

I enjoy fake affairs, flings, etc.

Don't see enough of them on Lit. This was a good one.

He is a mentally fucked up LOSER

But she must be brain dead too, for staying with him! Neither of them has any self respect.

Huh!

I know I've talked about stupid women, but now I get a chance to ramble about a stupid man. This man is a closet pervert. How could a man get off with his wife and constantly pretending it was another man? sick-sick-sick. I don't really like stories were one mate lies about affairs, etc. It only sows the seeds of distrust. How could he ever trust her again. Neither man nor wife had any redeemable qualities. It was a well-written story and thank you.

Oh, my goodness gracious!

So much stupidity to ridicule. Sorry DG but I have to agree, you are being unfair to HairyVagina. This is not one of your best written stories, So Suck-it up, boy! And no one gets nastier to the spelunkers than I do!

To paraphrase a quote from the great composer Sibelius "After all, nobody builds monuments to critics!"

Okay a B for creativity (that is actually what your critics hate about your stories is originality. Don'tcha yah know? They just lack the intellectual capacity to admit their flaws.). However a C at most for writing skills displayed. You usually do a lot better at coherent story structure. And your decisions here in character and story development are a D at best.

For crying outloud your production of stories runs damn close to qualifying for ISO 9001 standards. So once in a while, you strike out, so what? So did Ruth and Mantle and Aarron.

You are letting the analmousies and trolls get on your nerves with their constant whining and bitching. Writing for free is fun and liberating and fuck anybody who doesn't appreciate the wonderfulness of your prose.

Second time through...

Still a fun read. Five stars.

A decision of this magnitude that affects the course and tranquility of your ENTIRE family should never, NEVER be taken nonchalantly. You and your mate carelessly roll the dice without being absolutely certain that you are absolutely ice cool with whatever consequences occur from your dalliance(s), you may pay a crushing price. I've been a swinger since I was 25 with any girl I was dating. Even my wife as well. I suggest you talk to swingers first. Go to local swingers bar and just ask some of the couples. I have yet to meet a swinger couple that would talk to new people seriously considering this lifestyle. Swingers come from all walks of life and socioeconomic status. They are nice people, willing to talk honestly and frankly about this subject. There are no stupid questions! Be very informed and dead certain you can handle opening Pandora's box...

one when or the other partner in a marriage

start suggesting they want to go swinging...or swap partners etc...then you know there is something seriously wrong which needs to be worked out....if you can't work it out or make things better then give up and get divorced....swinging etc is no cure...just makes one partner feel angry and inadequate....

Reality check

Taking fantasy to far can destroy a family. He failed and learned two lessons number one don't make wife feel degraded and the second you need to truly support spouse. When he didn't go to awards ceremony, when he could have taken a vacation day was pathetic. He never even asked even when she went to him and let him know it was important to her. He was very lucky to have a special wife that showed him his mistake without cheating. They will prosper from the new strength that is coming from the trial, they walked through.