All Comments on 'The Bad Doctor Ch. 03'

by dlsloan

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Anonymousover 17 years ago

Try writing something realistic....

Ok...this story line about the dumbness of women and the idiocy of men who fantasize about it is just ridiculous. Try writing something slightly realistic next time, ok?

Anonymousover 17 years ago

Bad Doctor...Good Reading

Don't listen to the negatives. This is a great entry on the site and brings elements that I've not seen before. Keep up the frequency of submissions.

Anonymousalmost 17 years ago

This was a great story.. I know some people didnt like it.. but for those that do like the story line.. it was a huge turn on..

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.

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