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EXCELLENT
LOVED IT ,DEAR WRITER.YOU ARE ONE OF THE FEW ONES WHO CAN DO A STORY IN VERY DIFFERENT AND EXCELLENT PERSPECTIVE.
LOVE..mika
Really good
This was really enjoyable. :) Great job. Would love to see how things turn out for these two.
Fentastic........very .........very sexyyyyyyyyyy
you promise me to write 2....3....4....5...and more epeisode for this sexy stiry
Fentastic........very .........very sexyyyyyyyyyy
you promise me to write 2....3....4....5...and more epeisode for this sexy story.
Sensual and sexy
Its a shame I can only vote a 5 on this story - it was so gentle and sensual and the brother really felt for his sister and proved himself deserving of her - give us more on the pregnancy and ongoings of this couple - Thanks Jena121
What's with all the commas?
Interesting story.
Familiar
If you weren't' from Georgia I would almost swear I could tell you who the two characters in the story are as I had friend growing up who life mirrored this exactly. They are now living close to my hometown and happily married with two wonderful children. I know that there are a small group of people who know the truth and have no problems with it, and the children are healthly.
Beautiful story
Sweet, sensual, sexy, simply great.
Watch out with the commas, maybe some editing would help.
Love the way you write, I'm becoming addicted to your stories, hahaha. Keep going!
EXCELLENT!
One of the best stories I've read!
Keep them together forever!
This is true love! Beautiful!
Do you actually proof-read?
Laughable dialogue, unbelievable situations, and somewhere along the line you got hit by a punctuation bomb. Please edit and repost, this rushed effort sucks ass, no stars
vice is nice but incest is best
just a run of the mill story of a brother and sister fucking.....no real story line to it...
so so
It went way to fast, you should have taken you time, & wrote more like her giving birth...
A romantic little incest story.
With a no good mother a young man needs a break such as this. Thank you for writing.
Virgin?
Unless she believed in sex after marriage or was a nun its really hard to believe she's a virgin although it just makes the story more erotic oh and how come she wasn't in any pain when he popped her cherry?
need more
Story is to short.can't wait for second story
beautiful
Excellent story nice build up good sex although there would've been pain if she still had her cherry but over all good story
Virgin to sex
At her age she shurly used tampons so her hymen would not be intact....thus the lack of pain.
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