All Comments on 'Just This Once'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great start!

I hope this is just the beginning? This could be a very entertaining series! Keep it up. Cyrus

jushornyjushornyover 17 years ago
Yes

Wow, Red hot and steamy as usual

scorpiocopscorpiocopover 17 years ago
Hot

Awesome story. Loved the woman's perspective. Great fantasy realized.

TserancTserancover 17 years ago
yummy

another dirty little treat from Red! While quick and to teh point, I'm uber anxious to see what other ideas this girl had!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Make this a series!!!!

This could become a fantastic series with Amber having sex with many men. They should all involve multiple partners like this story! Amber handled 3 men with ease, so I would like to see her with 4 or 5 guys at one time! Amber needs more sex!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
What a HOT Babe!!!!

What a fantastic story. I love to hear the feminine side of such an event and you conveyed it so vividly. Thank you. I love the ending where you left the possibility for a repeat performance or an extension of the fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Take it further

Loved the long slow build-up and her confidence to go with it. I think you could develop this further - see where her limits are, put her at risk - maybe riskier places or more than 3 men, maybe strangers or teens or masks. I'd like to see her questioning what she was doing, but testing herself.

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