by coyoteugly
I rarely don't like stories..... But I hate this, you wouldn't act that way if you were being raped. Sorry but I've never read something more unsatisfying and illogical..
For the "you suck" commenter I have one question, did you happen to notice the question mark in the title? That is an indicator that even in her own mind she wasn't sure if it ended up being a rape or not. I left it up to the reader to decide, and then created a part 2 to show the aftermath both physically and emotionally as well as mentally of the first act.