All Comments on 'Camping'

by cnightshade

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Memories

Very good, brought back fond memories, looking forward to your next story

don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Very erotic!

At 28 years old she obviously could get pregnant and seal this liason with him for the next few years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Needs work

The first thing that struck me is you probably have never been camping. A dark campsite. A lantern inside the tent. They sure weren't hiding anything.

The other thing that struck me is how this classic zipless fuck was ruined by seriously inane dialog.

"I think you are so sexy."

"I want to see you cum so bad."

Jesus. It would have been better with no dialog at all.

age_mattersage_mattersabout 17 years ago
romantic

no need for words when there is attraction.. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I like it.

Great. Did the job wonderfully. Catch you again one day.

Claudius.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More

This is a great lead in to other chapters. You can't stop here

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