by sirajahmed10
Looks like u r cut for tis line. nice story, certain gd built up, to make a story tis long without breakin any of the interesting part is a feat. glad that i have read it.
Nice and long with a magnifecent build up, you truly are a tallented writer, the other authors couldnt hold a candle to you that was amazing!
Keep on enriching our life, with well pace, sensetive and very erotic stroies.
IT IS NO DOUBLT
ONE OF THE BEST PUT TOGETHER STORIES I HAVE READ IN A VERY LONG TIME..ESPECIALOLY HOW IT WAS DRAWN OUT AND NO SEX UNTIL THE VERY END...1000
It is one of the most exciting, thrilling,passionate love stories i have ever read and i read it again and again
you r simply great siraj bhai go one writing more and more for our enjoyment
thanks
Best stories i've ever read in Literotica. You really can wite!
I comliment you for this! If its a winner then you've already won after this story!
Keep up the spirit of Incest!
Wow. I have never read such an intense tale of forbidden love. Very well drawn out. Long, but never boring. I especially liked the idea of a starting point in arousement, leading to another point, leading to another. First it was the hair, then the armpits, then the breasts,then the final act. Very Good 5 Stars
I wish you had elaborated how he loved his mother's hairy armpits and their smell!
I visit this site often and this is the first time i have ever felt the need to comment on a story. I commend your efforts and eagerly await your next piece. Thank you and hope to see more of your work soon.
Truely one of (if not THE) best story i have read on this wonderful site. well put together, brilliant. keep it up my friend. i came at pg2, pg4 and pg6! True erotica, and i agree whole hartedly with what everyone else said before. can't wait for more.
This has to rate as the most incredibly well written erotic stories I have read ony ANY site. Could there be a continuation. WOW !! Absolutely superb and well done. A story writer extraordinare.
It is a pity Rahul has missed the sweet smell of his mother's hairy armpits.
You have woven a beautiful, enticing story of love and passion. Although long it was never boring. This story needs to continue. Thank you.
ITS NOT JUST ABOUT A MOTHER-SON RELATIONSHIP BUT HOW WELL A WOMAN'S BODY HAS BEEN DESCRIBED.LOVELY.
I've read many great stories here, but this one is by far the very best. I loved every part of it. Please continue writing.
This was the best story i have ever read . It should be awrded.Absolutely flaw less.I will give him 500 marks out of 100.
It is so beautiful that I'm forced to say it is a sublime sexual relationship which transcends any barriers of blood, race, family and perhaps taboo as well. In a word it is a timeless piece of art.
Best story I 've ever read, please add some anal love in it also.
Siraj bhai, it is a great story what u wrote but we the mom/son incest lover want more from u. siraj bhai u should be give some more anal subject in this story just like explore his mothers asshole, gave toung in asshole and inhale, carry his naked mom over the shoulder and walk every corner in the house with sexual joy, get some wrestling with his mom and lost to her badly and knowing that his mother is stronger than him, mother facesitting on her sons face presserly and told him to smell her asshole deeply (punishment for lost in wrestle to mother). siraj bhai u also known that in literotica indian mom/son storyline never write a valkyrie type of story where son lost to his mom in wrestle,fight and anything like challenging, this idea will bring a new excitement in indian mom son story as i think. And i request u deeply for authoring this in future. Siraj bhai we r waiting for your return.....
I masterbate 4 times in a row after reading this story.....What a story..
Now its 2010 and I am reading this story and others of Siraj for last 4 years. Its so sexy to read the luv process of son with his mother and its unbelievable to read intricate details.
Once my mother had grabbed my cock when I was with her and I had seen my sister naked. and also my mother naked in the arms of my father's boss and also their nightlong fucking.
On the net, i have not read more juicy story than this one by any other Indian writer. Mr. Siraj Ahmed, create something better than this one as your creativity in erotic literaure is superb.
U cnt End the story like this . I want more. I want them to talk about their New life after this then some Hindi dialouges. And i want son to fuck her Ass. Believe me dude i masturbated 8times on my Mother Panties by reading ur story. Plz I beg u to continue and involve Dad in this n do 3some. Plz plz plz plz plz
this is one of the best story..........wish you could have put some hindi sentences too.........A job done exceedingly well boy.!!! Wish I could nominate you for Litertica Nobel for Literature. ;)
Excellent, my friend. It's sad to see a beautiful story like this one plagiarised like this: http://indiansexstories.net/stories/Incest/exams_9201.html
This is one of the best incest story
Every son appearing for exam should get and pass the exam of fucking mom.
Next day Rahul fucked and took anal cherry of her voluptuous buttoks.
This was a sizzling story ! Take a bow Siraj . Feel like screwing my own mom.!!;-)
Sirajbhai,
You have made me your gulam, fan and slut too.
Exam made me so hot that I shagged twice today.
The scene in restaurant is one of the best. Every son should get such a chance.
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Being a dedicated wife lover had chance to see my wife in arms of her lover in a recent dinner.
I request to write nice hot chick stories too.
My mother and sister are also in active sex in family and out and so my wife following their cum filled tradition.
I am fantasing how our son will take his mother in bed and make her his slut like you made me yours as reader.
Also add illustration in stories like rgjohn on literotica.
Love mothers fully by licking every part of body and also fuck them.
rare thing with hot dearest one...he should be soft on her inner parts :)
And some of the comments are great too. I love the one by the reader who says that every boy taking exams should also pass his exam in motherfucking. That is so true. All sons should try out the wonderful hairy hole they came out of, at least once. They'll discover that nothing can feel as good, just so damn right, to their cock as their own mother's cunt. And the guy who's moved by this excellent story to go and fuck his own mother. Just go and do it, pal. Blowing your balls up inside your mom and filling her to the brim with your sperm is an achievement you'll be proud of all your life.
just a drag, no real sex at all, i feel totally betrayed by wasting my time reading this utter drivel, have u ever seen a women!?.
pls disregard all the false praises u have in the comments and get ur hands chopped off at ur local butchers.
this is why with ppl like the author existing, the world will always suffer.
finished only 4pages till now.....such a well narrated and sensual story. Brilliantly written.
The author well narrated the fucking of mother and son very nicely, though they have fucked but narration seems to be the imagination of the author, and it is well descripted. Incest sex is most common in India specially mother and son, because mother gets fresh and young energetic penice of her son at the age of about 40. and son gets the pleasure and experience of fucking a matured mother without any ill effects and consequences. So both are able to make love properly and nicely and son gets to penetrate properly in the cunt of her mother. Keep it up, enjoy and try group fucking. You both will like group fucking also. If possible , try to bring husband of the mother confidentially to fuck in group, mother, husband and son together, which is nowadays most common in South Indians, Bengalis, and Maharashtrians. Slowly and slowly it will become more common with other communities also. Incest sex is loveable also.
Best mom son story so far. The final sex act was too short & felt like wanting more.
Bhaijan,
I have been reading literotica ever since I remember. Years.
I don't know how can someone write so well. Especially erotica.
With such depth and feeling, as if you exactly know what each of them was feeling at that time.
Amazing story line.
Passionate. Intense. Not vulgar at all. Slow build up, but nonetheless erotic and
tittilating.
Keep up the great work, sir.
Stay blessed.
Could have included a perfect blowjob scene...Mom eager to taste his love juice..It would be so erotic ...Nd the slow building up of story is jst excellent...Made the readers reach the tip of pleasure..
I am impressed with the writing and would like to see more passionate sex.. Rahul impregnating Shobha, Rahul father affected by sudden stroke and peralysis becomes hapless after realising wife Shobha got pregnant and having Son's baby in womb .. allowing them to marriage and they starting new life as couple with Rahul studies on one hand and Shobha delivering baby and having more passionate sex with Rahul.
I loved the story and had ejaculated in every page... I fell in love with my mom after reading this and seeing her as a beauty in every angle. Loved the story
It is one of the best story I have read ever. I am hoping to have more chapters as 1 week is still pending.
Awesome, please don't End it.
it has just started.
waiting for next chapter...
Thank you for this story! I do LOVE it.
My mom had the same thighs and buttocks as Sobha!
I loved my mom the a son loves his mother. At the same time I lusted after my mom 24/7.
My mom was in 80% of my erotic fantasies including the jack-off ones.
Thank you for this story. You made my day with it.
Excellent writing skills, canβt stop myself from complimenting you dear Siraj keep writing thank you
The speciality of your stories is lot of erotic conversations between the characters which would make anyone ejaculate prematurely. You have not failled readers like me as always. Please continue where you had left giving a descriptive account of the fucking session between Shobha and Rahul. Kudos.
Awesome story, maintained the tempo and excitement... Can we expect a part 2
Bravissimo, maestro. I loved this story, gave you a 5.0 = π―% (πππππ) β€β€!
Brilliant story Siraj. I came in each page. Such a lingering story that kept exploding and finally it really erupted. Thank you friend. I am an Indian too and I am looking to chat anonymously. I am into incest too - mother son. I write too but not yet for Literotica. Have written a lot of motherson. Let's chat anonymously and share experiences and ideas.
It was amazing to start with. This has to be one of the best Mother Son Incest stories on literotica. I will rate this at the highest simply for the story line that you thought about. You can't beat your own talent with another story. OMG this was just mind blowing. The build up, the plot and the vivid minute details really caught my imagination. Indian mother is the sexiest and you have our attention with your writing. You are simply brilliant when it comes to Mom son incest romantic story. It takes a lot of time and energy to finish those works with such finesse. A big thank you from your avid reader. May God bless you with health and happiness so that you can write more for people like us. Thank you.