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The one I lost

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by LeBroz12/29/06

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Welcome to Lit
With this piece of prose poetry of the immense pain
When 'the one' is no longer with you.

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by Unbridled_Passion12/29/06

powerful

love can be gentle and kind, or it can rip your heart out!

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