Can't believe that no one has reviewed this over the last five years. The imagery was very nice but my only complaint was that there was not enough of it.
It has been years since I've enjoyed a blow job and never have I heard the pleasure so lovingly described.
reely lovd ur linez.. it gave me d feeel ! ! ;>
I couldn't have said it better. Great poem!
Great rhyming! While my reading my cock gets hard and throbbing as if is being sucked!
I am so wet now. Also it makes me wanna give a blowjob to anyone.
I love rhyming poems and yours is nice......BUT, have someone edit before you submit. Incorrect usage detracts from the pleasure of the picutres your words paint.
nice! I am so licking my lips right now.
Good pacing and use of rhyme, only one of which was a bit forced. You have a good ear for meter.
Holy crap thank you I just masturbated it got me so hard thank you
keep it up pay no attention to critics
That's a dirty slut that made my cock hard
You poem kept the rhyme going,
even as my cock kept growing,
images of those sucking lips,
yielded dreams of cuffs and whips,
perhaps you will stop and deny me,
then turn about and even tie me,
hold my face with thigh and leg,
Don't let go until I beg.
Ride my face; there is no haste,
Let me enjoy your sweet taste.
I got harder and harder as I read.! Well Done!
Great cadence and rhythm. Naughty piece that works. :)
This was terrible.
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