All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 18: Hanan'

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rachlourachlouover 17 years ago
loved it ~

interesting addition to the chain despite the abrupt ending. I look forward to the next part of the story. Thanks.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
Great addition. . .

I always like it when extra power is added to the stories. Great chapter to the chain and I look forward to your continued participation!

DarkniciadDarkniciadover 17 years ago
Great chapter =)

Great story, and hot meeting between the two Djinn =)

Now, just don't leave us hanging too long with the rest of the story ~_^

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 17 years ago
This will be mentioned on the AH.

Sex, intrigue, war........even a little hint of romance....well done....I'm glad that I read this chapter...it fits very well with the overall tapestry of the Laresa chain. I also like that Mirza has a mind of his own too, and doesn't feel any loyalty to that usurper Yusuf. He cleverly did ONLY what he was told to do...and Laresa helped him use that loophole in a very sensual and erotic way.

LynnMckLynnMckalmost 12 years ago
Cheated? Yup :(

Darn -- it was getting really good. Acts as a good teasing trailer though :)

ausvirgoausvirgoover 7 years ago
Really good!

I'd love to see more of Hanan's story.

FrankwuoFrankwuoabout 7 years ago
Please... More

More, please

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