Outstanding! This was the first story I read on Literotica that felt like literature, not smut. You have a great talent for writing and handle a difficult theme with taste and class. You also take the trouble to give the story a sense of realism, with all the small historical details, which I appreciate. I loved the way the story moves between contrary moods and emotions, and the language is so beautiful and sensual it makes me want to weep. Please, will you write more?
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Anonymous03/05/12
Perfect
You managed the context beautifully with almost no back story. Masterfully done.
English
Great start....
This was a very sexy story! More would be great!!
Wow
Exquisite. I cannot help but hope you have more in store.
terrific story
Wow. Loved that. Hope you will make this a series.
The best......
To date, this is my favorite story on all of Literotica. Thanks for sharing.
Great
Very well written. Great use of language. A slow burn building up... very nicely done.
Great
Very well written. Great use of language. A slow burn building up... very nicely done.
Better than everything else out there!!!
Outstanding! This was the first story I read on Literotica that felt like literature, not smut. You have a great talent for writing and handle a difficult theme with taste and class. You also take the trouble to give the story a sense of realism, with all the small historical details, which I appreciate. I loved the way the story moves between contrary moods and emotions, and the language is so beautiful and sensual it makes me want to weep. Please, will you write more?
Perfect
You managed the context beautifully with almost no back story. Masterfully done.
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