Kitten Love

Its perfect.

Don't touch it. no sequels no second chapters just....*sigh* perfect.

awesome

Billy's full recovery over his own... I don't think anyone out there woukd've done the same awesome wish

Great

This is easily my favorite story. Would really like to see a second chapter.

Excellent story. Congratulations.

Very sweet, well drawn out characters, good pacing, good story development, and very nice ending.

It finishes at the right spot; it would be superfluous to continue.

Awesome story!

great

Touching and Amusing

I wonder how many have longed for this very incident to occur. I once enjoyed the company of a wonderful kitten that ended up preferring me to her actual owner. Before she was spayed, I swear there were times it seemed she was presenting herself to me when she was in heat (I was lonely at the time, so maybe I misread it).
Anyway, I enjoyed your exploration of the concept, the detail of Mitch and his selfless, heroic nature and the intense feelings they have for each other. You ended well enough, but I echo many comments here that it could have been substantially longer and more in depth. That prick Jake, for instance, with his threat to "finish the job" could have made for an intense addition or sequel. Also, the PT Angie and her son, Billy. Could have been amusing to see how Mitch explained Mia, with Billy likely knowing what happened as kids seem to do. Oh well. At least we have fairly thoroughly developed characters to finish the tale in our own minds.

I get one big question though. When something like this occurs (animal becomes human, character transferred from fantasy world to ours, etc), what would happen in the long run with no formal identity, like a SSN, any records or the like?

Sweet .

Honestly I was worried that ass hole of a next door neighbor was going to to something terrible to one of them .

Magical...

and the best kind. A love story with a lovely twist. A must read for romance fans. Good show...Take care -- and have a holly, jolly holiday.

Laughed a lot!

Her new favorite toy - chuckle ....
Just don't let her bat the ball(s)!

LMAO!!!

Thx

really sweet

I think that was a fantastic story. A female kitten's dream to be his woman... a dream of being all loving, all devoted, all to her favorite owner, who saved her from a fire. Even though he couldn't believe it... and had a lot of great amounts of sex...

what a great story. I definitely a worthy 5 star rating!

TiM

Dave was a riot.

The conversation between Mitch and Dave was worthy of Joss Whedon. I can think of no higher praise.

I wish there were more chapters to this. That and Jake needs to be shot...

Beautiful

A wonderful story. I would like to see additional chapters to resolve a few things, like a mother and ex that both need to be slapped, a close friend that would be more than curious about the profound changes in Mitch's life, and a sadistic bastard who really needs to die horribly. And lastly, Mitch's return to a job he loves.

Seriously? Only one?

If *ever* a story needed to continue, this is it...{sulking in the corner, waiting for another installment} (Yeah, 5+ stars...)

This cries for another chapter!!!!

Loved it

Sign me up for the next installment.

Yeah, I definitely hope you write more of this story.

you left us standing in the parking lot

wondering where it goes from here.

there are so many directions it could go. so many issues to resolve. so many questions left unanswered.

I'm Sad

This is a great story, but it could certainly use just a bit more.

Worse yet it looks like AngeloMichael doesn't write much anymore. The last posted work was 06/25/12 and before that it was this story in 01/02/07...

BRAVO

Sir, I'm reading you for the first time and I'm so excited. I absolutely LOVE the LIFE you gave to this storey. I can see and feel it happening and would love to be part of it. You write so beautifully and convincingly that the flow of this tale never missed a beat. It felt like your heart and soul conjured up this fantasy from a real experience. I chose to believe in you and pray you continue to write....SOON. GOOD LUCK and THANK YOU for a wonderful, arousing and thought provoking Love Storey. KimXO

Miss Kitty Loves This

Great plot for a movie. Wonderful story. I have two cats and love them to death. Jake truly needs to be eviscerated.

A picture painted with words

I think the author had fun writing this. Using words and phrases like, she clawed at his boxers, looked at him with her almond eyes, and of course there was her pussy. One observation, I am sure that when he slid into her from behind, it could not be confused with doggy style. . I too loved Dave.

Oh how I wish MichelAngelo was still around to finish this masterpiece.

A couple things

First of all, PHENOMENAL character development. That's a super sad way to start out a story, but you did a great job with it. There were several parts that had me laughing my ass off(ben afleck). The fairy thing was a little weird but hey, she has to turn human somehow. I like how she got a wish too. Some things I have questions about: how the hell is he going to explain to Angie a) no more cat Mia, b)there's now a super attractive woman living with him named Mia, c) he's not absolutely devastated over the loss of Mia, and why d) is there no phone call inviting him to Billy's recovery party, e) is it that whenever a cat turns into a human after always being a cat she's always a white girl? That last one is just an observation but I would like answers to it.

Answers

Actually I all ready have written a scene that answers a, b, c, and sort of d. As for e, it said in the story Mia as a cat's wish was interpreted by the Fey as impulses/ideas/images/what-have-you in her head not clear worded thoughts. She really only majorly knew Mitch so she imagined herself as like him but female.

What a pleasant surprise

to see the comment and response from AngeloMichael. I hope all is well and that it means we will someday soon see more submittals on Lit.

hoping

I keep coming back

hoping to find Ch. 02. Perhaps, AngeloMichael, you will soon be able to complete your draft?

How to:
Mitch and Mia go fishing again. They take a reminiscent walk around the area where their wishes were granted and either encounter Dave, or Elma reaches out to them. They learn that the Fey has decided to do something for Mitch because he was so selfless with his wish by using it to benefit someone else. This can come in several different ways. The scars slowly/gradually clear, being replaced by a renewed, blemish free visage, over an extended period of time. or a clinic offers to perform the work on his behalf. or an organization adopts him as a project providing access to a specialist for surgery. or . . . . . .
There remains the unresolved issue of documentation for Mia.
And something really needs to happen to the very evil pyro-torturing neighbour.

btw: Elma is a very creative name for the wood nymph. Willow would also have worked. Pine, Fir, Oak, Walnut, Cedar, Redwood, Aspen, and so many more, not so much.

Loved, loved, loved it...

Only thing that could make it better...?

Would be more of it...

Uhmm

Seriously???! Wtf!!!! I have found some good stories on here but nothing gripped me like you have... Please please please tell me you have more in the way???!!!!!!!! I need it like I need air. Do they have babies? What happens to the fuck face Jake? Angie and Billy? Oh my god!!! I need more!!!!!

Well that was fun!! ...and I'm perfectly content with the way it ended, unless of course they get home to find the neighbors house burned to the ground and jackoff jake laying dead burned to a crisp, half trapped under the collapsed porch roof... With a big cat crouched on top of his smouldering corpse taking a shit! Yeah, that would make me happy! ;)

...actually Im glad the story ended without another confrontation with that dickhead! I was almost afraid to finish the story for fear he would pop back up and twist my stomach out of my happy place, heh!

Thanks for writing!!

*Holds up plate* More please.

Please?

PLEASE?!