Kitten Love

Sweet!

Very lovely story.

nice

Ilove the story and the only bad thing about it is how short it is. what will happen. I need to know

It was good but

it seemed incomplete as if you'd gotten tired of writing it and wanted to move onto something else.

part 2

i really liked this tory however i hope you are going to do a part 2 to this story. It ended to quickly.

More to come.

My thanks to everyone for the great comments! Keep an eye out for part 2 of this story - AM

Great Story

Please don't leave it there.

Love It! Love It! Love It!

Can't wait for more. One of the top five stories I've read perhaps. Very, very good!

Not done

Like the others said, this story is not done. There is a family's murderer to deal with. Hope you do continue as you said you would.

Very cute!!

loved this story very much. the premise is the great part, and i hope the two of them start to go places in the future. encore, encore!!!

Cute!

Okay, I like the story, but what was the comment about Ben Affleck? He was the BOMB in "Phantoms"!
:-)

Seriously, it was a good story with some witty dialogue. I thought the pace was a little off after the transformation, but it wasn't a deal breaker and certainly didn't detract too much from the charming characters.

Wow

What a great story, I come here to read the raunchy stuff but this made me cry and cuddle my cat. I wish she could become human.

well done!

The dialogue here is great, as are your characters. I really *like* Mitch, and the sex was both touching and hot!

great read :)

This was a great story. I read all kinds and though Sci-fi is not one of my regular genre's I thought it was great. I was a little worried about her turning back into a cat or having a litter of half human babies though... :/
But great all the same. {^_^}

What a lovely story and well told.

I look forward to your continuation as you left one or two things 'hanging in the air'. Thank you for the pleasure.

A really neat story. I was afraid

there would be more; enough to mess up their, or his, life I bet.
I'm sorta wondering; if he were to get his old face back through surgery, would Mia still love him?
He has a major problem right now, she's gonna wear him down to a 90 pound weakling.
Good story, fun story and a hot story, too!

one of the more interesting, out of the norm

stories,,, growing up in the mountains years ago, without radio or tv or modern visceral time killers, we used to sit down almost every night to listen to gentle stories like this a lot. and before the total disruption as well as intrusion of games and other highly visual pollutions, like tv, video games, etc. you remember every story vividly after listening to it just once,,,,

thank you, angelomichael

GREAT STORY

Great story, I've never written a coommet about a story that i've read befor, but I just had to say that you've done a great job. PLEASE write more.

Interesting Fantasy

Very good romantic story. Your character development was strong enough that you might consider a sequel.

i enjoyed this alot...

very sweet and sexy :).

neat concept

A really sweet tale. The idea of sprites and such has been around forever, and the treatment here worked really well. The poor guy helped a friend and was rewarded in the end. Nice...

Really great!

Please don't stop here, this story has so many good elements to it. It surely has a long way to go yet!!! John B.

Awesome story.

Mitch is a Hero.

Rly rly nice :)

I rly liked this story. The whole way thru I was so scared it'd have a sad ending, like Mia would become more human, meet an attractive guy and leave. :( But I like that she kept the unconditional love she gave as a cat. :) Mitch was also a very likeable character, and somebody we WANT happiness for. His unselfish wish was rly amazing and a great swerve given what the story summary said. :)

Plz end it here unless the future is going to be happy for them and they stay together. I dun want to see them sad :(

good job

loved it, hot but not vulger and very sweet. I'm so happy with the happy ending wish though that Mia and Mitch would have ran into Jess and shown her what she missed.

cool

This story is sooooo sweet. Hot and nor voulgar. Mitch has deserved to be loved. I wish that his ex find out that he find someone more pretty, sexy and better than she. I wish that girl in store and that bastard Toby were ground crushed by the sweet of Mia and beautiful of love between Mia and Mitch.

Totally awesome!

Yeh, ive probably read 30 stories from Literotica, loved alot but never felt the need to post a comment, but this one... Is just perfect in my opinion =)
Keep it up!

Me

OMG

oh my god . . . this story is so incredible

please please please more . . .

it sooooooo deserves to have a happy ending :-)

Adorable!

Really wonderfully written - the story is too cute, absolutely to die for. Hot sex scenes, an engaging story, -and- a happy ending :) Lovely job

Wonderful Story

I love cats and it appears that if you don't; you hid it very well. The story seemed to end very abruptly as I was expecting Jake to reappear and cause Mia problems. Is another story with these characters in the works ? Hope so. Ron

It just gets better

This whole story just kept getting better and better-- nice lead in and sex scenes!

*Purrrrrrrs*

Wonderful Story...I am a cat person and this story just appealed to me on so many different levels. Sweet and loving but very erotic and well written! Mmmore purrrrretty please!

So cute!

What a wonderful story for a cold Sunday evening! My cat Maya is curled up besides me...
I cried a bit and giggled and am just feeling warm and fuzzy! I HOPE there will be a second part!

Awesome

This was one of the best stories that I have read. If you could make a sequel, that would be awesome. The only bad thing I have to say is that there should be more to this story, it is so intoxicating. Keep on writing this way for ever.

Wonderful

This was a terrific story, I really enjoyed it.

Wow

Great story very well written.
Although hows he going to explain to his (few) friends that Mia is now a human?? That might be an awkward conversation

Hyper story

Excellent fairy tale. One of the best stories I have ever read on the Net.I hope you can carry on it together with Series of matters.

Awsome

i usually dont read the long stories, but this one is great!!

Comment on Kitten Love

this was a remarkably GOOD story and this reader in far-off Soth Africa, thoroughly enjoyed it. Superb writing skills.

Absolutely Amazing.

This was the first time I had ever read a story over 4 pages long, because I'm weary that it will drag too much. But this time it paid off. I loved it completely. The story was perfect! Continue writing, because you have skill. Excellent skill.

EXCELLANT

READING THE OTHER PUBLIC COMMENTS IT STRUCK ME
THAT WHILE PEOPLE WERE COMMENTING ON IT BEING
A LONG STORY. IT FELT TOO SHORT TO ME. IN
THE MEANING THAT I WISH IT COULD HAVE GONE ON AND
ON. IT WAS THAT GREAT A STORY.

Very good

It's a very good story. Great plot. But I wish that the man who had burned Mia relations to s cinder had gotten his just rewards.

Truly Fantastic!!!

This was a truly awsome read. Most of the time you don't get an indepth plot with deep emotions and characters that are "people" instead of sex zombies that only think with the sexual organs betwixt their legs. (Not that I mind all that...:D) I had a fantastic time reading this story and would really love a continuation. Though from the post date, I highly dought that will happen. But if this is it, then I am happy. Again you have written a truly fantastic story and I will undoughtably be re-reading it again in the future, and telling all my friends about this lil'fic!

Wow

One of the best short stories I've read ever, anywhere.

Wow

I enjoyed the plot of this story more than any I've ever read on literotica. Very nicely done. I'm excited for part 2... no pun intended. ;)

Awesome

This is definitely one of the hottest stories I'v ever read.

Thank you.

This is really heart warming and worth reading. I am a Mitch type of guy myself. Thanks.

wow

I enjoyed this a lot. a very sweet story. sort of a cliche plot, but you had enough creative bits to keep it interesting and enjoyable. i'm glad i read it.
now write more. :)

Wow.

This story is amazing. Looking forward to a possible continuation.

MORE, MORE, MORE

Bring on the family and howabout Mia meeting Jess

A nice and uplifting story