by LeslieRose
Leslie she was so hot and i can understand her being nervous but you havea sexy story you didnt have any thing that needed correcting but you keep up the great writing I will be looking for your next chapter.
pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
if you ask me i thank that was the most lamest story i ever read and next please try to think outside the box when u write a story about strippers.
I accidentally gave your story on star but meant to give it five stars.