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by pmbluemoon

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
panic.

A most distrubing rendering ~ vivid imagery paints the desperation.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A bit more punctuation might help the reader in better appreciating what appears to be an attempted suicide tale.

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 17 years ago
Unsettling

Images and feelings of a very callous world. A poem that’s hard to shake off. Good work.

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