All Comments on 'Love Is Necessary'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
True....

With each line written, I can feel each pain that love does bring in the end.

Very true words here, for Love is Necessary.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Just a suggestion, but it might have even greater impact if it were about half its length; pull out those lines with lesser impact and those that remain will cut even deeper. Play with it a bit and see what you think.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Anger..

and pain..make me finally realize that "Love is Necessary"

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