Truly, in some parts this story reads like a romantic poem, although it's clearly erotic romance. That's why it's worth 5-stars.
You write well. You have immense creativity and artistic talent, but like with all authors, your stories would be perfect if you can find a good proofreader and editor to comb through your work.
Still, despite minor technical errors, your stories are an easy read, very erotic, and warm. Keep up the good work, A_N_L!
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It reads like a poem!
Truly, in some parts this story reads like a romantic poem, although it's clearly erotic romance. That's why it's worth 5-stars.
You write well. You have immense creativity and artistic talent, but like with all authors, your stories would be perfect if you can find a good proofreader and editor to comb through your work.
Still, despite minor technical errors, your stories are an easy read, very erotic, and warm. Keep up the good work, A_N_L!
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