All Comments on 'Lisa's Blow-Job Diary: April 23rd'

not bad but needs more details on the blow jobs

Nice idea for a story but I agree that it would be much better with more detail about each blow job.

Very erotic idea to suck as many uncommitted cocks as possible in a normal day. May be a bit more erotic if author spent a little more time on each BJ.

I agree that detail is a lot better, I like the idea, but the story and the details are soooo weak.

I liked the lack of detail. It made it seem more like a diary. It's also very hot how routine it is to her. Plus those terse sentences act in a similar way to the punchlines of well delivered jokes.