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This is a good depiction, Tess,
of the tense kind of evening most of us have endured. I particularly like the last two strophes.
Minor edits: "practiced to never leaving a mark" should perhaps be "practiced in never leaving a mark"? Also, "hors d'œuvres" is misspelled.
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Liked this piece where you stripped all masks away,
The masks that pretend nothing untoward going on here.
And my face ached from the smile you created.
Wonderful.
Geez! This rendering was wonderful. Why am I so hungry! and what's with this crazy idea ~ I want to go dancing.
let's the reader eat from two plates...
one sexual and the other a lesson in dinner planning...
great job...
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