I like this kind of stuff as you can see from my stories. Don't be surprised if you get hammered in this category, though, it's a tricky one. It may be better received in Group Sex or Fetish. I'll be looking for more from you two!
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Anonymous01/09/07
Whew!
When the women get nasty, the boys are in trouble! Keep it coming, you nasty people!
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Anonymous01/09/07
Illiterate Nonsense
I only read the description: "Later that night Lisa fucks Mike and I with her strap-on"
Writer, find yourself a good class on ordinary rules of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. When you educate yourself, you'll find out it's "Mike and me..." Since you can't be bothered to use proper language, I can't be bothered trying to find a way to give you anything but the lowest possible score.
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Anonymous01/09/07
Good story although it needs editing.
I liked this story in spite of its grammatical lapses. A little editorial attention could go a long way with this
material.
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Anonymous01/10/07
Ummmmmmm!!!!!!
I loved your story. The positions in the story were made it different. I was so hot afterward that I had to pull out my dildo and go to work. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous01/10/07
Great Story
Loved it. Though a few grammatical errors, who cares when it is hot. To the comment Illiterate Nonsense. I didn't think writings on literotica could be submitted for the Pulitzer prize for educational writings. Pull your head out of your ass, shut up, and enjoy the topic, not the grammatical errors. They can work on this without your nonsense comments.
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Anonymous01/11/07
You Give Me Fever
Very hot. I need a cold shower. Is Lisa around?
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Anonymous01/13/07
Grammar
fucks Mike and me -- you wouldn't say fucks I, so don't say fucks Mike and I - clear enough?
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Anonymous07/02/07
hurry
Come on, enough talk. Lets get to the next chapter.
English
Good story
I like this kind of stuff as you can see from my stories. Don't be surprised if you get hammered in this category, though, it's a tricky one. It may be better received in Group Sex or Fetish. I'll be looking for more from you two!
Whew!
When the women get nasty, the boys are in trouble! Keep it coming, you nasty people!
Illiterate Nonsense
I only read the description: "Later that night Lisa fucks Mike and I with her strap-on"
Writer, find yourself a good class on ordinary rules of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. When you educate yourself, you'll find out it's "Mike and me..." Since you can't be bothered to use proper language, I can't be bothered trying to find a way to give you anything but the lowest possible score.
Good story although it needs editing.
I liked this story in spite of its grammatical lapses. A little editorial attention could go a long way with this
material.
Ummmmmmm!!!!!!
I loved your story. The positions in the story were made it different. I was so hot afterward that I had to pull out my dildo and go to work. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
Great Story
Loved it. Though a few grammatical errors, who cares when it is hot. To the comment Illiterate Nonsense. I didn't think writings on literotica could be submitted for the Pulitzer prize for educational writings. Pull your head out of your ass, shut up, and enjoy the topic, not the grammatical errors. They can work on this without your nonsense comments.
You Give Me Fever
Very hot. I need a cold shower. Is Lisa around?
Grammar
fucks Mike and me -- you wouldn't say fucks I, so don't say fucks Mike and I - clear enough?
hurry
Come on, enough talk. Lets get to the next chapter.
Very hot indeed!
I love your scenarios and the amazingly hot action in your stories. Keep up the good work.
Nice & Erotic!
Another good story ... very believable, hot and great sex, we really enjoyed it!
We've read the comments ... and we've read a lot of really poorly written stories with here excellent grammar.
Look forward to reading more penned by the two of you ....
DVD recommendation?
Hot story! Any DVDs out there
with similar 4-way bi-curious couples theme/action
that you might recommend? Thanks!
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