College Days Ch. 04

rushed ending but still a great story

ending seemed a little rushed but still love the story. can't wait for the next chapter :)

Keep it down .

I would say keep it up however I'm doing enough of that just following this story . Like I said before , you are a damn good storyteller .You make my day !

Wishing for more from Down Under

This has to be one of the great stories on line. You're
doing a great job mate, keep it up.

Great job

I have read this story from when it was first chapter was posted. It is great to read a "real" story on this site once in a while. I can find myself apart of the action, and sometimes I feel like I am fallingin love with the two sisters. keep up the great work, I cannot wait for the next chapter to come out. I hope it is soon.

Good flow in the story

Really nice story. Very good flow and quite good characters too. Seems to develop well. I very much look forward to future chapters.

Nice Development

The characters are filled out and likeable. It is rare to find a story that has the right amount of plot and pace, Keep it up

cant wait

Like the story so far cant wait for it to continue

Please Hurry!

I love all these chapters its a fantastic story please hurry and allow us to read the next chapter of this fantastic piece of literature

Cant wait

I cant wait for the next chapter, so please don't make me! :)

great

what a great romantic story please continue the series soon i can't wait to read more dose mark end up with one of his sisters or dose he find someone else please inform us

more?

when will we see another chapter??

great series

please continue.

Love it!

I love this story - it's easily one of the best on Lit. Please give us more chapters!

nothing since January??

I love this story, and after reading 4 chapters just loving the characters and the possibilities and the romance and the fun and the potentialities for wonderful fun in the future. I do hope you take up writing this story again, as it is so beautiful and worthy. Thanks so much for what you have contributed. Great writing!

Terrific, Marvelous, Fantastic...

Wow! This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read... erotic or otherwise. I can't wait to see what you have in store in following chapters. The romance and sex are perfectly balanced throughout the series, and the characters are wonderfully executed. Keep up the great work.

It has been a really good tale so far.

I really do hope you will finish it at some point in the not too distant future.

Dude

You better finish this!

masterpiece

really nice story. i hope you will find time to finish it soon....was enjoying it very much. :)

Really Good

Not a lot of description in the sex [I guess Mark is still too shy to say much :-P ] but heavy on the romance, which is good. I'd like to see him end up with Tammy as a "visible" girlfriend, while still having the romance [and some sex] with the other two; maybe a 3-way with Tammy and Jes, because it would be nice for them to remain friends and lovers. There's so much you could do with this; you could keep writing for years on it--and I'd still read it!

More!

amazing story! we definitely need more!

.........Coming Along......

Good job bring things together.....i like the pace and story line...Good job....thanx for hrs of good enjoyable reading...

Most engrosing & erotic peace of writing. Loved every bit of it.

my opinion

I appreciate how the author is taking the time, making an effort to develop the characters for this story. That the protagonists have an opportunity to think about what they want to do and perhaps concern themselves with the possible consequences of their actions. For good and for bad.