All Comments on 'Nev and Faer: In Plain Sight'

I could not fault a single thing about this story...nor would i want to. It is the BEST story I have read here for a very long time.

I would love for it to be continued. Hell, make it a book.

Thanks

Luna

Excellent story.

Brilliantly written, arousing build up and wonderful climax!

I greatly enjoyed your story as it deals with something that I have fantasized about, but would likely never do. However, it seems like a snippet from a longer fuller story.

Hi! Realtrek here. On behalf of me and co-author, Titania, thanks much for the great feedback and support of the story!

Dam, that was so hot! Yes, please continue.