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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/11/07

Sensitive and Believable

Great Job; excellent writing and a fresh theme.

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by Ken Nitsua01/11/07

Needs polishing, but good job

Grammar and punctuation (especially of dialogue) are frequently wayward, but the simultaneous feelings of lust and guilt when being unfaithful to a longtime partner are caught with vivid clarity. I'm hanging with you and hope you'll work on polishing your writing--you have talent. Best, Ken

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