Great story. U really have talent. You should write more :)
by
Anonymous11/27/10
Good
Good one!
by
Anonymous08/12/13
not good at all
wheres the rest of the story this needs atleast two more chapters to properly finish it off. what happens next? do the parents find out? do they continue? does she get pregnant? does he move in with her? what about the little sister? stop being lazy and either finish the story now or delete it now half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half.
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hellagood
write more that was hot
Great
Great story. U really have talent. You should write more :)
Good
Good one!
not good at all
wheres the rest of the story this needs atleast two more chapters to properly finish it off. what happens next? do the parents find out? do they continue? does she get pregnant? does he move in with her? what about the little sister? stop being lazy and either finish the story now or delete it now half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half.
To Good to Stop Now
Calls for 2 or more chapters more.
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