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Nice
A well-constructed, neat little story. Thanks HDK. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
LOL
This is an example of imagination really running wild. Great story ability and enjoyed reading this story and the twist in the end.
Expect more from you.
lwyslv@hotmail.com
sick sick sick
I loved it!
leapyearguy almost had t right ...
he should have said slick slick slick!
I do like sure thing bets! He played those losers like a fiddle.
Fun read, hdk!
Regards, Jack
Tee Hee
HDK, I don't know anyone else that writes this type of story like you. Even though I had an idea of where you were going by the middle of the story, I loved the ride. You my friend have a wonderful imagination!
CCM
Great Story
I alway love your stories wish we had more writers like you.
You know.........
It wasn't till Dirk entered the room that I got the idea of where you were going with this story.
Very funny tongue in cheek humor here. And a funny read. We needed the humor around here!
-Risq
very clever
no wonder your my fave author in this site. such imagination. always interesting.
thanks.
For the first time, I saw the ending coming early
Maybe I have read too many of your pieces and have begun to know how your mind works, but I realized early on that the Prudence at the party was the wife of the boss. The careful wording of the reply to the remarks about her name was the give-away that something there was crucial, I think.
A Royal screw up in Steve's and Barry's ass....
Oh! That was good so good and down right mean but hey it's a dog eat dog world. May the best man win and Dirk should ditched his own Prudence since she was the real loose slut just after a few drinks (Of course we could only imagine that scenario since she was in THAT room with THAT Steve.)
Real nicely done and funny another one of the good Loving Wives submission without the wives fucked another man and those authors who wrote such stories think they were writing masterpiece. NO SHIT!
How? How do you do it?
I have often wondered how you can write such engaging and entertaining stories in only 2 pages. Now you are down to only using one.
Thanks for the tale.
Gus
Awesome!!
Need I say more?
Telegraph
It was easy to figure out when he talked to the second guy. And reading the whole thing only to find there was no sex was even more disturbing. And what woman says "...her enhanced breasts"?
great story
this should be in the humor section.
enjoyed it very much.
Mike from Texas
Pretty good!
Very well written and an enjoyable read. I did think that it ended too abrubtly, as if you had someplace to be and just shut the door so to speak. But overall, loved the style and imagination.
FABULOUS... funny and great
Loved it. It was Just BULLY!!!!!
I am not sure about two woman being named Prudence... his wife at home and the boss's wife both being named Priudence?
oh what the hell.... great story
boy what a friend!
with friends like this pimp, you do not need enemies.
you ask him to escort your wife to a party, to protect her as an old friend, because you will be late; and find out he has been making bets who can violate her behind both your backs!
so his enemies are gone now, but i hope Mr. Mumford finds out what happened and kicks his pimping ass out the door too.
What an ugly story
I barely made it thru paragraph 5 before I gave it up
You did it again!
HDK,
I don't know where you come up with these ideas but I hope it's a never ending stream. You are very funny most of the time, and you accuse me of having as warped a sense of humour as you? You sir are the master!
Funny story
Funny and well-told. Thanks.
So magnificent
Oh thats so good and funny having Mike say to steve that she was mikes wife was incredible i cracked up finding out that his wife was never there in the first place.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga
LMAO!!
Nice job HDK:)!!!
Falling down from chair
My laughter and the noise of the downfalling has woken up my whole family.
Thank you for this very amusing story. I must read some parts again to understand, because my english is not very well. Now I understand and grin ...
Nucleus
For the absence of prudence
Prudence after all means not only the exercise of sound judgment in practical affairs but also foresight. Therefore, for lack of prudence in dealing with Prudence they had to be kicked out ASAP…
Witty funny and surprising as usual.
100
Oh you bad boy. you had a typo. ruinrd the entire story, blahm blah, blah.
Sorry HDK. Just making fun of yhe anal commeters.
GREAT STORY. It's amazing how some writers can tell so much with so little while others just go on and on with nothing said
I read Boy what a friend and then
I thought he has a point. I thought for a minute or so and changed my mind. It was not Mike's fault that the bosses wife drinks too much and then misbehaves. You are responsible for your own actions. If the Bozo had spiked her drink with Mike's knowledge, he should have been on the firing line. The bosses' wife should know how to control her drinnking and if she gets smashed at every party, the boss needs to know and get her some help.
It must have been a small office with close intermingling for one manager to know the name of another managers wife in such a short time.
Oh, hell yes!!!
I love it when a plot comes together. Good stuff! Thank you and keep it coming, please.
Great job
Keep up the good work. you always seem to have good story lines and reasonable outcomes.
Fun twist
Grabbing her breasts doesn't seem too much of a jump at a party, but it came to a decent end before outstaying its welcome.
The point?
Really not funny, kind of clever, but to what end. Should be listed under non-erotic.
absolutely great!
Nobody does the surprise twists like HDK! I could tell part way through the story that something was up, but unlike some apparently clairvoyant readers I didn't guess it until the end. Beautifully done!
I also re-read it carefully, to see whether HDK perhaps cheated us a little by saying something misleading. There's misdirection, but it's all very carefully done. For example, the hero worries about losing his bet with Tom, but never worries about losing his initial bet (which we understand at the end of the story is a sure thing, since his wife is in another city).
All we can say is, Thanks for another great story--and when is the next one coming?
ohio
Hats off to you, HDK
As usual, an excellent story - short and to the point. You are simply amazing in most of your stories.
A whale of a clever tale
HDK,
and as usual, well told. I see the grumpy trogs of the infamous Brotherhood of the Anonymous got their usual licks in but to all who read your stories with anticipation you've done it again. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Good one!!
Always like your stories and this another good one, great twist.
I began to get the suspicion when he became a little worried about Prudence. Mumfords timing at arriving at the party couldn't have better!
Easy thousand but won't Mumford be mad that he didn't take better care of Prudence??
LOL
short and sweet, great job!
NIce twist
Good job. Patience and brains is what you used to make this story's twist so much fun.
You Cagey Old Devil
I liked it. I kind of had you pegged midway through the tale as Mike didn't seem too upset. Great little twist.
It would have been good to get more of the details of what Dirk found and what he did...
But this was sweet.
Charleybear
Just too good to say much but what a great read
I am not imaginative, as you had me hook line and sinker.
Thank you again for such fun and entertainment.
PT
LOL
imagination at its best!
How Droll
Truly a droll story! Congratulations.
SimpleTom
ROFLMAO
Great story with a nice twist at the end. Loved the hell out of it!
WOW
That was GREAT never even saw that one coming. THANKS
Prudence = a loving wife
HAR HA HA! Me loved it long time
Third time
Third time reading this, First time voting, sorry, I love it every time I read it. Very smooth with a great bite at the end. Very well done. Thank you. Jim in AB.
Just read the comments (and story) again
boy what a friend said:
"you ask him to escort your wife to a party, to protect her as an old friend, because you will be late"
where the hell did that come from?
did anon read the story? All he did was offer to help her with her coat. Escort? Reminds me of my highschool lit days. How much can you read into a Shakesperian play.
slick,sick schtick!
This enhanced story sticks out a bit awkwardly in spots, and the punchline doesn't quite slip under the radar, but nevertheless it is a very smooth and engaging read - well done!
Prudence
I had a girlfriend named Prudence once and I still have some fond memories of her.
Cute
It's a fact...hate em or admire them...players are very successful with women.
I don't like them personally and never have, but they do make great villains!
That was funny.
I rated it 5*****.
Deducted means to take away from, past tense.
Deduced means to logically arrive at a conclusion, past tense. The two were confused in this story.
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