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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/09/07

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Tell him this and he'll be out the city in record time; all this needing and wanting and not sure of deserving.

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by duddle14601/10/07

lonely

An incomplete female ~ looking for a man to complete her.

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by duddle14602/07/07

lonely girl.

Reads like a song sang by the late Julie London. Moody yet poignant with wanting and desire. Enjoyable Read.

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by tazz31705/15/12

PUTTING ALL EGGS IN ONE BASKET

is easier to carry and bad when they fall, TK U MLJ LV NV

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