you're an amazing writer. i usually don't like lesbian oriented stories but i must admit that i love all of your stories involving Hawk and her 'crew'... :) It would be nice to find out what happens to Trish after she finishes her apprenticeship (is that a word?) with Gretchen.
After reading your last 3 stories, I guess you have forced me to read all the rest of your stories. The 3 about Hawk were GREAT!! Very entertaining and great writting. You told a great story, placed plenty of twists and turns, and put in sex where it was needed. It didn't distract from the story, which seemed to be the main focus, but instead enhanced it.
...by an excellent author, as someone said earlier, all the Hawk stories are great, as was "A Touch of Death". I've enjoyed them all immensely. A stunning mix of mystery, excitement, sex, and humour with the occasional passage that I found very moving.
PS: ...run through the ringer...(sic) Although the alliteration is good, the word should be "wringer" not "ringer", the former is a device for squeezing water out of laundry, the second is a person that rings bells.
As a Fan of the real 'Skip Niccio's' work, (and waiting (im)patiently for him to complete book four, but I won't be telling him that), I love the backdoor references that a lot of your readers probably didn't get.
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i loved it!!!!
you're an amazing writer. i usually don't like lesbian oriented stories but i must admit that i love all of your stories involving Hawk and her 'crew'... :) It would be nice to find out what happens to Trish after she finishes her apprenticeship (is that a word?) with Gretchen.
Sure force me to read more!
After reading your last 3 stories, I guess you have forced me to read all the rest of your stories. The 3 about Hawk were GREAT!! Very entertaining and great writting. You told a great story, placed plenty of twists and turns, and put in sex where it was needed. It didn't distract from the story, which seemed to be the main focus, but instead enhanced it.
Another tour de force...
...by an excellent author, as someone said earlier, all the Hawk stories are great, as was "A Touch of Death". I've enjoyed them all immensely. A stunning mix of mystery, excitement, sex, and humour with the occasional passage that I found very moving.
PS: ...run through the ringer...(sic) Although the alliteration is good, the word should be "wringer" not "ringer", the former is a device for squeezing water out of laundry, the second is a person that rings bells.
Well Done
As a Fan of the real 'Skip Niccio's' work, (and waiting (im)patiently for him to complete book four, but I won't be telling him that), I love the backdoor references that a lot of your readers probably didn't get.
Well Done.
Hawk is one of my favourite characters on this site
I loved all 3 of her stories - full of warm & lovable characters.
It's such a shame that you stopped posting.
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