This is one of the best depictions of a father/daughter relationships I have ever read. It is a tender, understanding story of a beautiful love.
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Anonymous02/19/07
OoooOoooMmmHmm
The way that they love and care for each other is well-
expressed. their passion is evident. your writing is quite good. keep it up. I almost made a mess this was SO Good. Thank you. Right on. Nothing wrong in this family : that I can see. LOL
I like the way you write--not just telling a story, but describing and creating a scene. It appeals to me much more than a bunch of unimaginative dirty words strung together. There are so many great ways to describe sex--I get really tired of the crass ones. Also, I can't enjoy stories where there's no love--that's really the bottom line for me. I believe anything goes if love is there.
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Anonymous10/10/07
very nice
thanks for the read, it did the trick! :)
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Anonymous10/10/07
alovely tale
iloved this story.
keep up the good work.
i'd like to read more like this.
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Anonymous12/27/07
LOVED IT!
I absolutely adored this story. Though short, it was one of the best reads. Keep up the excellent work!
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Anonymous02/01/08
Great!!!
This story is really good, gets straight into it!
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Anonymous08/18/08
Awesome
Simply beautiful. MORE!
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Anonymous09/13/08
Soooo Sweet!
Needs to be longer, more detail. Very Sexy though. Heat inducing.
English
Short, sweet and sexy..
Mmmm. Daddy loves his little girl and fills her with passion and.. and.. well you'll just have to read the story to findout all the yummy details.
So much better than the average story in this cat!
Keep it up!
oh My
That was totally an awesome read!
Congratulations
This is one of the best depictions of a father/daughter relationships I have ever read. It is a tender, understanding story of a beautiful love.
OoooOoooMmmHmm
The way that they love and care for each other is well-
expressed. their passion is evident. your writing is quite good. keep it up. I almost made a mess this was SO Good. Thank you. Right on. Nothing wrong in this family : that I can see. LOL
Daddy's girl
SHORT AND SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL - keep it up - Ta
Thanks!
I like the way you write--not just telling a story, but describing and creating a scene. It appeals to me much more than a bunch of unimaginative dirty words strung together. There are so many great ways to describe sex--I get really tired of the crass ones. Also, I can't enjoy stories where there's no love--that's really the bottom line for me. I believe anything goes if love is there.
very nice
thanks for the read, it did the trick! :)
alovely tale
iloved this story.
keep up the good work.
i'd like to read more like this.
LOVED IT!
I absolutely adored this story. Though short, it was one of the best reads. Keep up the excellent work!
Great!!!
This story is really good, gets straight into it!
Awesome
Simply beautiful. MORE!
Soooo Sweet!
Needs to be longer, more detail. Very Sexy though. Heat inducing.
very lovely
a very beautiful piece of literature. simple and sweet.
WOW
LOVED IT!!!!!!!! Super Sexi
Where's the Story?
A scene well drawn and described, but just a scene after all. There's no real story here, no buildup, plot, conflict, etc.
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