All Comments on 'Quality Time'

by bourbonslut

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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Short, sweet and sexy..

Mmmm. Daddy loves his little girl and fills her with passion and.. and.. well you'll just have to read the story to findout all the yummy details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
So much better than the average story in this cat!

Keep it up!

badgirl1972badgirl1972over 17 years ago
oh My

That was totally an awesome read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Congratulations

This is one of the best depictions of a father/daughter relationships I have ever read. It is a tender, understanding story of a beautiful love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
OoooOoooMmmHmm

The way that they love and care for each other is well-

expressed. their passion is evident. your writing is quite good. keep it up. I almost made a mess this was SO Good. Thank you. Right on. Nothing wrong in this family : that I can see. LOL

Jena12Jena12over 16 years ago
Daddy's girl

SHORT AND SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL - keep it up - Ta

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Thanks!

I like the way you write--not just telling a story, but describing and creating a scene. It appeals to me much more than a bunch of unimaginative dirty words strung together. There are so many great ways to describe sex--I get really tired of the crass ones. Also, I can't enjoy stories where there's no love--that's really the bottom line for me. I believe anything goes if love is there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very nice

thanks for the read, it did the trick! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
alovely tale

iloved this story.

keep up the good work.

i'd like to read more like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
LOVED IT!

I absolutely adored this story. Though short, it was one of the best reads. Keep up the excellent work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great!!!

This story is really good, gets straight into it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Awesome

Simply beautiful. MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Soooo Sweet!

Needs to be longer, more detail. Very Sexy though. Heat inducing.

nanosecondnanosecondover 14 years ago
very lovely

a very beautiful piece of literature. simple and sweet.

CindersmokeCindersmokeover 14 years ago
WOW

LOVED IT!!!!!!!! Super Sexi

trigudistrigudisover 8 years ago
Where's the Story?

A scene well drawn and described, but just a scene after all. There's no real story here, no buildup, plot, conflict, etc.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114u8 days ago

Mmmm

So beautiful,loving,romantic & naughty all rolled in one.

There’s no love more stronger than a daddy & his babygirl.

You proved it with this offering and as a result. I am a fan of your work and adding you to my favorites.

Btw…..I’m a whiskey drinker myself (Jameson) ;)

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