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Desperado

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by Anonymous

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Can this even be called a story?

Wayyyy too short. I could have written this in 5 minutes or probably less. Kind of a lame plot to boot. Typical. Generic. Common. Grow some creativity.

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by Anonymous11/17/15

Where is the rest. What happen during and after the zipper came down

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by Anonymous03/01/16

quickie

I think he ejaculated right after and that was it...what an idiot..

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