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Great story
I don't know why people bitch because a story wasn't written to "their" liking. The other 99% of us can speak for ourselves.
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Lets try this again. Constructively, you went too far. Erotic isn't crudely sick as the bastard black baby you pointed to excitedly.
Less is more unless you can't write decently and need the crudeness as a cover-up.
Your talent is there. Let it out without compromising it and limiting the crowd size.
So when do we get more of this interracial thing
I want to read more
A nice original start on the interracial theme
I think you wrote a nice story. It was a little rushed but that seemed to go with the tenor of the story's theme.
Keep writing
Not Bad
What's with all the asshole haters.
What "black bastard baby?" The woman in the story didn't have one, she feared having one due to unprotected sex. Damn was that guy who wrote the comment too fucking stupid to figure it out???
The moment by moment narritive was an interesting hook for me. Keep at it!
Good Swift Narrative and Hot Interracial Sex!
Next time what Connie needs to do is flash a whole truck full of those black dudes and get them to follow her to some cheap motel along the Interstate where she will take them all on, all ten of them at once!
A few of them will whip out rubbers, but she'll yell at them to do it raw and deep inside her pussy, ass, and mouth, all at the same time. One black will video tape the whole 90-minute encounter, and Connie'll give him her address and ask him to mail her a copy. When Jim gets hot and horny and is looking for her "to fuck some multiple black dicks" some night, she'll go to her closet, pull out the video (aptly titled "Connie Does Ten Horny-Ass Homeboy Truck-Pimps," pop it into the VCR, and watch as her husband's eyes do flippity-twirls around his sockets. Then, that lucky Jim will fuck her until it's 9 a.m. and time to go to church. Next time she'll try taking on 25 or more of the big-dick, well-hung bastards. But, how will she (or Jim) set this one up? But...stay tuned, folks...flcouple4yall is thinking how to tell it!
black white whatever
i would like to see her with consequences and the chance to embark on a new and different life. it happened to be a black man for the story, but same end wanted for her
Fast Paced
Fun....fast...nice quicky!
Hot story
I loved the view point you employed telling this story. It made for one hot tale.
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