All Comments on 'Straight Turnout'

...but I have to admit that it was well written and funny. Also, kudos to you for coming up with "Glllp" for the sound of a man being choked by dick--that's the best representation of that particular sound I've run into. Best, Ken

this story is not only a turn out but also a very funny and well written story! you have both talent and imagination!

I enjoyed this a lot, it's very well-written. I hope to see more stories from you in the near future.

I loved your style and your characters. I hope there is a sequel coming, or at the very least another story from you. I'm looking forward to it.

I absolutely loved your story. The plot was exciting and the bisexual action very hot. I also loved the humor. Keep them coming!

Man that was hot. I really liked the characterisation too and the way each character seemed to get their just desserts; sort of made it feel like real life, with some real consequences. Liked too that Goodlong didn't abuse Jamie, he really did pleasure him. Congrats :-) Hope to see more from you, especially more adventures of Jamie, in the future.

What a fantasy! What a perfect first time! To be taken by a powerful man and used for his sexual pleasure, to not realise that you would love being fucked and to just discover it as you were falling in love with his cock! A perfect fantasy like this might actually give me the courage to let another man fuck me - and I can only hope that it might be this good!

What a hot story. I jacked off.

What a hot story! I loved the way you contrasted gay/bisexual sex, which is really exciting, with boring straight sex!

loved it! minimum story, maximum fucking.

That was one of the funniest and sexiest stories I've ever read!

Whoo! That was hot and really well written!

I'ts a crime that their are not any comments on this wonderful story. This is my favourite story on literotica. Please write more.

Wow !! This was great !!.. Only one other story on Literotica I keep going back to and it's along the same line.. I think it's called ""Myron".. It's good, but not as good as this one...

Would really like to read more of Jamie continuing with Mr Goodlong.. Maybe he goes back for seconds; to taste Mr Goodlong's seed, and continue with total turn-out and getting Goodlongs full load breeding. Hmmm..

good quality stuff.

It was good. My favorite part was the one with Becca taking her tits out to try and keep Jamie straight. How about a prequel, showing Nancy's husband being turned?

First I need to find my Becca. Then I need to find my Mr.Goodlong. Love this story.

I loved your story, very sexy, and funny too. I was turned out by an older man when I was much younger for my very first sexual experience with anyone, and even though I dated a lot of women and am married, I have always been and always will be a homosexual slut.

Totally hott! I luved the story.

I do enjoy stories about gay guys turning out / seducing straight men and this is one of the better and sexier ones I've come across. Yes it is a little unbelievable in places but hey, it's fiction and a good read. It made me cum and makes me want to advertise in Craigslist for a sexy gay stud to complete my own turn out!

For never having another man inside my butt, I felt pretty hot about being turned out by another man sometime.

I could see the pleasure of another man having me suck him, the give him my virgin ass while my wife watches.

Never had a man cum in my mouth or ass, but this story had my crotch hard and dripping with interest to of what it would be like to completely satisfy another man's cock.

Am a 20 y/o bisexual female and this story never fails to get me off! Thanks to the writer for quite a few orgasms.

I'm straight and virgin to sucking cock or anal. But like the guys in the booth, I fully got off to this story. Probably hardest during the heavy blow job scenes. Then when Jamie was slowly getting turned out by Mr. Goodlong, I couldn't stop touching myself to the older mans thunderous rhythmic cock pounding out Jamie's ass. Definitely read intensely, and curiously turned on how well Jamie received cock up his virgin butt hole. Having fingered myself there a few times I already know i'm tight. As much as I'm not interested in getting turned out, I can't deny the hot desire I felt in this story to have a man thrust his big hot meaty cock up my virgin ass and find my sweet spot.

mink.? what a mink.? or do you mean minx.? however another nice wank story.?

It is so much fun gettin turned out. im.. well i wuz straight i am bi now. mi friends uncle n i were up one nite n he decided to watch porn so we did n he whipped out a very nice cock. he started stroking it n i watched n he told me to quit watching him n get down to suck him. n i wuz curious at the time so i did. it smelled so good i grabbed it n stuck it straight in mi mouth no hesitation. i sucked him off n he told me to get naked. so we got naked n he bent me over spit on his 8 inch coke n slammed in mi virgin ass so hard. mi legs went numb n after a min he finally started to hump me it felt so good in me i started moaning loud he spanked me a told me b quiet mainly becuz mi girlfriend n his wife were asleep in the next room so i moaned n he kept fuckin mi ass wuz so tight he came in 30 minutes. to this day he still calls me at nite to spread mi legs wide n fuck me he wile he spans mi 7 inch cock n fuck me deep til he's ready to make me swallow his Cum or ram it deep in mi tight ass

nice and juicey

still hot read 2nd time around well done

Now I'm sure I'm gay

I'd love Mr. Goodlong to take me in the back of his car and make me his willing fuck toy!

Very fucking hot, got me stroking the whole time nice and slow so I can read it all and blast at the end.

Bravo!!

love your story. Reminds me of the first time I sucked cock at a book store glory hole. After that first cock I was hooked. Soon after I was fucked for the first time and lost interest in pussy. Love cock more than ever now. Once you have cock you never go back ; ))

What a hot story. I jacked off twice.

Of horse manure.

Both hot and hilarious! I got off half way through but the last part of the story is just comedic gold! Obviously not realistic but as an author you went all out and it was worth the ridiculous effort to paint such a bravado outro. Well done!! Never thought I'd laugh aloud to a porn story; life is full of surprises. :-D

I wish something like this story would happen to me. I very much want to be turned out by a big dick stud. Hope I get to experience it someday soon ;)

I gotta find this car lot. I want that guy's 12 incher to plow me.

You should write a chapter two about Jamie and Mr. Goodlong having another liason.

I do would love to read more; this story & For The Girl r my favorite stories so far

Fuck!! I have read hundreds of literotica stories but this is the only one I have ever felt obliged to comment on. It was awesome!!! Favorite story so far. Please continue or I will hunt you down and make you write by force

and hot!

Okay, I'm not into gay sex or gay anything really but DAMN! This was a hot story!

never read a story that hot before. got me so hard

after the second paragraph, I cold no stop, it was really damn good..

that was hilarious, you should be writing professionally

The only thing that could have possibly made this story any hotter is when Rod's horsecock slipped out of Jamie's as Rod was cumming inside him, if Jamie in desperation had reached back and grabbed Rod's cock and slammed his abused ass back on to it impaling himself and arched up and immediately cumming a second time with thick ropes of cum shooting out of cock while he screamed.

i lost my anal virginity in a car, i rode his cock for nearly an hour cumming twice without ever touching my cock.

i broke up with my girlfriend the next morning and then rode his cock again that afternoon, it's the only way i like to cum now with a big cock up my arse moaning like a whore.

DAMN got me soooo HARD!!! GREAT story hope to hear more

This has to be one of the hottest - and funniest - stories on the entire website! My only quibble I have is with the ending: I would've had Mr Lay - after getting a glimpse of Jamie's well-fucked arse - deciding that he wouldn't mind fucking Jamie too. He therefore reverses his decision to fire Mr Goodlong and fires Nancy instead!

Got so hot reading this, I wanted to have a turn riding that big cock in the back seat. Not even gay, but can't deny reading this got me hard and heavy in fantasy to have my virgin ass lubed up and taken hard by another man that way.

to make a situation, which is so outrageously unbelievable,readable and funny,is no mean feat.

.

But what I wanna know is... Where's the caveman?

Pls pls pls write a prequel about how Goodlong turned out Nancy's husband! Pretty please?

The title of my comment says it all!

Glllck!

Priceless! Great story and now my favorite written sound effect!

(I wish I would have lost my virginity exactly the way Jamie did!)

A PILE OF FUCKING SHIT.HILARIOUS BUT TO SICK.

VOMITING OUT SO DIRTY AND IS A RAPE.

HEY, SOUNDS LIKE ITS YOUR OWN EXPERIENCE WHICH YOU HAVE WRITTEN. SO CANT BELEVE YOU WERE THE ONE RODE THE 12' inch ROCKET.

Ha!!! feeling pity on you.but not really.

Was in the marines,and one of the men,wasn't getting any sex.so I never sucked a cock before.I told him that I would give him a blowjob.so he let me and I gave him a blowjob 4 times a week for 5 years.been married 3 times.but nothing is more awesome than a man!

I expected another dark and remorseless rape and got a light hearted comedy. Good stuff. I liked Beccas character who in other stories would had been a cruel manipulating bitch but here shes a funny bimbo whos plan backfires :)

Best story ever! From the best porno name in history to the most amazing sound effects...fantastic! Can't wait for the prequel. And please tell me Jamie and Rod get together afterwards.

That left me wanting a 12 inch fat cock stuffed in my mouth and filling my Ass with a load that big, cumm running down my legs.

Love the way Mr Goodlong fucked the str8 out of jamies . Wished some older guy did that to me in my 20's

Great story! Would make a really hot scene in a movie!!

I let a friend of mine fuck my wife with his huge cock almost 11in. and thick. she loved it we stayed all weekend with him and he fucked my wife a lot and even let two of his friends fuck her. on sunday night i called my cus. and he drove us home then he fucked my wife in the mouth untill she drained his balls then he went home. we have done this a few times and I have even started sucking his huge cock my wife want him to train me to take all his cock. we are loving it.

Remind me of the night I was turned. I was 48 and had never had thoughts of sex with a man. When it happened, I was passed that I hadn't found out sooner in life. I am now gay and 100% a bottom.

I would love to learn how to suck a white cock and swallow cum than have my black straight virgin ass fucked bare back by a white cock and be turned out !

Mmmmmmm DAMN that was soo damn hottt!!! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!

Jamie learns man sex very fast. Of course, this is a one-way road. When he takes Mr. Goodlong's man meat up his ass, he is lost. He enjoys the fuck so much that he cannot help but fuck himself. So he begins to ride the older man's fuck pole. „He began gyrating his hips, grinding his ass onto Mr. Goodlong's dick. He was stroking the length of his cock with his ass. Up and down. Up and down.“ A natural development towards a beautiful climax, which reg_roch describes in a wonderful manner.

Fucking hot and hilarious story! It turns me on how well Jamie receives Mr. Goodlong's fuckpole. "Jamie slammed his ass down hard with loud whumps. WHUMP! WHUMP! WHUMP! He rocked up and down, jacking Mr Goodlong's dick with his ass." I can almost feel the fuck and hear the sweet sound. And I laughed my head off, when Becca desperately, but hopelessly tried to get Jamie off Mr Goodlong's tool. It's only natural that Jamie is already hooked.

Very shallow and stupid

Too bad there was never a prequel. I agree with those who would like to have read what Rod did to Nancy's husband. Presumably Rod fucked her husband, but how? But, at least Nancy got her cumuppance, so to speak, right in her face, which she deserved for wrecking Becca's good deal on the car.

can we get another experience between the two?

wow

HU , I REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY !!! I WAS HARD AS HELL WISHING THAT IT WAS ME IN THAT LITTLE COMPACT CAR WITH THE SALESMAN FUCKING ME LIKE THAT !!! I LOVED THE WHOLE STORY !!! THANK YOU VERY MUCH !!! I LOVE 2 HERE MORE STORY'S LIKE THAT IN THE NEAR FUTURE !!!

DAVID H.

to be taken like that just the complete surrender

That's it for the kid -- his first faggot fuck is not his last! As soon as he gets away, he's going to look for more and more cock, and find to it's a whole other, panty-wearing, getting fucked repeatedly up the ass life, while sucking boyfriend after boy'friend's cock. What a great life! I love it for myself -- he will too!

It's wonderful to see this boy surrender totally to the older man's phallus. He has found the ursurpassable pleasures of receiving dicks into his mouth and his asshole and will never be happier than when sucking cock and getting fucked up his arse at the same time. Thanks for this most beautifully written story! I would love to read more of Jamie's further sex life, especially threesomes.

and had sucked cock but my first girlfriend did not know. I remember the first time She caught me getting it, she just stood there and watched. Just watched and then told me how she was going to cash in on me. I cried as the guys finished. She would make go into New Orleans and sell myself to men and then watch me. Most of the guys got of on having her watch her boyfriend suck or get fucked. 4yourpleasureiam

Never better than what is not offered.

I got a 'kick' out of getting a straight friend drunk.I know it is an old story,but it happens.Anyhow,he was drunk and I was horny,I kept thinking about his 'hype' about his girlfriend.It turned me on and I started to think what fucking him might be like.Pounding into him,he must have noticed.He got hard so he must have felt something on his prostate;I felt it.He never said anything later.

I'm ready to be turned out but I lust for a blackman to totally own me

I think most men if given the chance would really enjoy a nice stiff cock sliding into their ass. The thing is most guys are too macho to let it happen. I know I Was for a long time. Then one day I got to suck a dick and it was only natural to have him fuck my ass too. I was fortunate to have an aggressive male take me to his house and properly seduce me into it. I'll never be the same after the best orgasms I've ever had. Wow cock is fun. Oh by the way I came reading this and enjoyed eating my sperm.

Felt like I was reading a cartoon. The characters are pure idiots. Maybe it’s supposed to be a comedy.

Holy fuck that was fucking hot!!!

I think he was right mind you if i saw a twelve inched id probably submit too. Too bad for becca she would of been a fun lay afterwoods or during. And the two in the security room, i hope they get their go next

Mr.Goodlong is real stud,he fuck his wife and virgin guys,i would kiss and suck that beautiful cock and balls full of potent seed..

Hot, He should have told his boss I have sold the car and there is no need to clean they will take it as is. I did it to satisfy the customer and your bottom line will get the benefit. Then have a 3 way with Jamie and the co-workers husband. LOL,

This story, so boldly and straight forward, it kept my dick on full alert and my ass bucking out at my cushions wanting a serious fuck right now...

It wasn't hard for Goodlong to turn that cock loving whore out. It is certain he didn't even make it home before more cocks filled both both of his holes because that horny little shit walked off that lot but wasn't satisfied. Goodlong did a lot to satiate his need for cock but whores like Jaime need at least 5 cocks a day.

taking cock is so natural to white boys

has my ass loosening and pulsating and feeling empty

please

At first I was just into exhibitionism and getting fucked by my girlfriend with a black strapon. I soon realized I needed black cock. I sucked a few, and soon found a dominant black partner who turned me out and fucks me regularly. He stays over sometimes and we sleep in. It's great waking up in the morning with a black cock up my ass.

This is one of the hottest gay porn stories ever!♥ Fuck I got so damn hard!!!

thank u great story , just to be in his place , jealous

What a great way to have your first experience with a man. Good job of keeping my interest and my cock is so hard

Why it most of the writers think the ideal breast size is always a 36 DD? Its ridiculously repetitive.

The idea of a straight guy getting turned out in front of his busty bimbo gf is fantastic. The sound effects and the comedic undertones create a silly and sexy scenario that makes the story a quick read. I will bust to this story for years! Wish there were more like it!

I mean I think it's too good to end with one chapter ..there could be more parts

This story is so hot, I’ve cum to it soo many times. Keep writing more stories like this!!

“....Splat after messy splat...” I laughed out

That story is absolutely amazing. You should write more about it.

loved it

this was one fucking hot story, please tell about how he turned nanvcy's husband out.