Straight Turnout

A complete crock...

...but I have to admit that it was well written and funny. Also, kudos to you for coming up with "Glllp" for the sound of a man being choked by dick--that's the best representation of that particular sound I've run into. Best, Ken

incredibly hot and funny

this story is not only a turn out but also a very funny and well written story! you have both talent and imagination!

Very good

I enjoyed this a lot, it's very well-written. I hope to see more stories from you in the near future.

Terrfic story

I loved your style and your characters. I hope there is a sequel coming, or at the very least another story from you. I'm looking forward to it.

Simply awesome!

I absolutely loved your story. The plot was exciting and the bisexual action very hot. I also loved the humor. Keep them coming!

Wow

Man that was hot. I really liked the characterisation too and the way each character seemed to get their just desserts; sort of made it feel like real life, with some real consequences. Liked too that Goodlong didn't abuse Jamie, he really did pleasure him. Congrats :-) Hope to see more from you, especially more adventures of Jamie, in the future.

Perfect Turnout

What a fantasy! What a perfect first time! To be taken by a powerful man and used for his sexual pleasure, to not realise that you would love being fucked and to just discover it as you were falling in love with his cock! A perfect fantasy like this might actually give me the courage to let another man fuck me - and I can only hope that it might be this good!

Holy cow!

What a hot story. I jacked off.

Hot Story

What a hot story! I loved the way you contrasted gay/bisexual sex, which is really exciting, with boring straight sex!

dominant turnout

loved it! minimum story, maximum fucking.

Hilarious and so hot!

That was one of the funniest and sexiest stories I've ever read!

Whoo! That was hot and really well written!

WOW!

I'ts a crime that their are not any comments on this wonderful story. This is my favourite story on literotica. Please write more.

100% Satisfaction !!

Wow !! This was great !!.. Only one other story on Literotica I keep going back to and it's along the same line.. I think it's called ""Myron".. It's good, but not as good as this one...

Would really like to read more of Jamie continuing with Mr Goodlong.. Maybe he goes back for seconds; to taste Mr Goodlong's seed, and continue with total turn-out and getting Goodlongs full load breeding. Hmmm..

Excellent

good quality stuff.

A prequel

It was good. My favorite part was the one with Becca taking her tits out to try and keep Jamie straight. How about a prequel, showing Nancy's husband being turned?

Favorite story

First I need to find my Becca. Then I need to find my Mr.Goodlong. Love this story.

My own turnout

I loved your story, very sexy, and funny too. I was turned out by an older man when I was much younger for my very first sexual experience with anyone, and even though I dated a lot of women and am married, I have always been and always will be a homosexual slut.

Totally hott! I luved the story.

Loved It

I do enjoy stories about gay guys turning out / seducing straight men and this is one of the better and sexier ones I've come across. Yes it is a little unbelievable in places but hey, it's fiction and a good read. It made me cum and makes me want to advertise in Craigslist for a sexy gay stud to complete my own turn out!

Turned Out

For never having another man inside my butt, I felt pretty hot about being turned out by another man sometime.

I could see the pleasure of another man having me suck him, the give him my virgin ass while my wife watches.

Never had a man cum in my mouth or ass, but this story had my crotch hard and dripping with interest to of what it would be like to completely satisfy another man's cock.

Wowza

Am a 20 y/o bisexual female and this story never fails to get me off! Thanks to the writer for quite a few orgasms.

Impossible not to get tuned out

I'm straight and virgin to sucking cock or anal. But like the guys in the booth, I fully got off to this story. Probably hardest during the heavy blow job scenes. Then when Jamie was slowly getting turned out by Mr. Goodlong, I couldn't stop touching myself to the older mans thunderous rhythmic cock pounding out Jamie's ass. Definitely read intensely, and curiously turned on how well Jamie received cock up his virgin butt hole. Having fingered myself there a few times I already know i'm tight. As much as I'm not interested in getting turned out, I can't deny the hot desire I felt in this story to have a man thrust his big hot meaty cock up my virgin ass and find my sweet spot.

mink.? what a mink.? or do you mean minx.? however another nice wank story.?

sexiness

It is so much fun gettin turned out. im.. well i wuz straight i am bi now. mi friends uncle n i were up one nite n he decided to watch porn so we did n he whipped out a very nice cock. he started stroking it n i watched n he told me to quit watching him n get down to suck him. n i wuz curious at the time so i did. it smelled so good i grabbed it n stuck it straight in mi mouth no hesitation. i sucked him off n he told me to get naked. so we got naked n he bent me over spit on his 8 inch coke n slammed in mi virgin ass so hard. mi legs went numb n after a min he finally started to hump me it felt so good in me i started moaning loud he spanked me a told me b quiet mainly becuz mi girlfriend n his wife were asleep in the next room so i moaned n he kept fuckin mi ass wuz so tight he came in 30 minutes. to this day he still calls me at nite to spread mi legs wide n fuck me he wile he spans mi 7 inch cock n fuck me deep til he's ready to make me swallow his Cum or ram it deep in mi tight ass

nice and juicey

still hot read 2nd time around well done

My god

Now I'm sure I'm gay

great story

I'd love Mr. Goodlong to take me in the back of his car and make me his willing fuck toy!

Fucking hot!

Very fucking hot, got me stroking the whole time nice and slow so I can read it all and blast at the end.

Bravo!!

I loved being turned out

love your story. Reminds me of the first time I sucked cock at a book store glory hole. After that first cock I was hooked. Soon after I was fucked for the first time and lost interest in pussy. Love cock more than ever now. Once you have cock you never go back ; ))

What a hot story. I jacked off twice.

What a pile.

Of horse manure.

Wow!

Both hot and hilarious! I got off half way through but the last part of the story is just comedic gold! Obviously not realistic but as an author you went all out and it was worth the ridiculous effort to paint such a bravado outro. Well done!! Never thought I'd laugh aloud to a porn story; life is full of surprises. :-D

So fuckin hot

I wish something like this story would happen to me. I very much want to be turned out by a big dick stud. Hope I get to experience it someday soon ;)

I want it

I gotta find this car lot. I want that guy's 12 incher to plow me.

More

You should write a chapter two about Jamie and Mr. Goodlong having another liason.

Need to read more

I do would love to read more; this story & For The Girl r my favorite stories so far

first time commentor

Fuck!! I have read hundreds of literotica stories but this is the only one I have ever felt obliged to comment on. It was awesome!!! Favorite story so far. Please continue or I will hunt you down and make you write by force

Hilarious

and hot!

Wow!

Okay, I'm not into gay sex or gay anything really but DAMN! This was a hot story!

fucking hot hot

never read a story that hot before. got me so hard

found this by accident

after the second paragraph, I cold no stop, it was really damn good..

gay comedy

that was hilarious, you should be writing professionally

The only thing that could have possibly made this story any hotter is when Rod's horsecock slipped out of Jamie's as Rod was cumming inside him, if Jamie in desperation had reached back and grabbed Rod's cock and slammed his abused ass back on to it impaling himself and arched up and immediately cumming a second time with thick ropes of cum shooting out of cock while he screamed.

HOT SISSY-HOT WIFE

LOVED THIS TRUE STORY !!!!

i loved being turned out

i lost my anal virginity in a car, i rode his cock for nearly an hour cumming twice without ever touching my cock.
i broke up with my girlfriend the next morning and then rode his cock again that afternoon, it's the only way i like to cum now with a big cock up my arse moaning like a whore.

DAMN got me soooo HARD!!! GREAT story hope to hear more

One of the best stories on Literotica

This has to be one of the hottest - and funniest - stories on the entire website! My only quibble I have is with the ending: I would've had Mr Lay - after getting a glimpse of Jamie's well-fucked arse - deciding that he wouldn't mind fucking Jamie too. He therefore reverses his decision to fire Mr Goodlong and fires Nancy instead!

Back Seat Ride

Got so hot reading this, I wanted to have a turn riding that big cock in the back seat. Not even gay, but can't deny reading this got me hard and heavy in fantasy to have my virgin ass lubed up and taken hard by another man that way.