All Comments on 'Daddy Please Don't Leave'

Leave writing to writers!

And just what have either of you two posted? You're not even a big enough person to put even a fake name to your commets.

Amy not your best, but you're a very good writer and I always enjoy reading your postings.

Thanks

George Willard

Loved the story, it was worth the wait! Don't listen to those other people, keep writing stories like this!

I enjoyed many aspects of this story Amy. Ignore the negative critics (seems like one only knows how to spell one four-lettered word).

"Oh keep going... don't stop... oooooh daddy I'm cummin... I'm cummin." I cried out loudly as I held his head tightly and thrusted my nipple into his mouth.

Thats just about when I shot my load and just missed the keyboard

Actually, Amy is a horrible writer who knows jack shit about basic sentence structure.

One small example.

"I'm 22 years old and the mother of your grandson, I'm not a kid anymore, you can tell me the way it is."

This is THREE sentences, not one.

Its a story and characters don't have to speak the Queen's English. Get yourself a life instead of trolling this site and causing trouble.

Nothing like a home based delivery system!

You're absolutely right, Amy. Characters don't need, perhaps shouldn't, speak the Queen's English...but you should punctuate the sentence(s) properly to make it(them) more readable. Perhaps you shouldn't chastise readers who give you good, constructive advice.

The story was hot and please continue it.......For all of you dumd son of bitches who didn't like it , why can't you just say so without being so fucking critical....If you want correct spelling and punctuation go to the fucking library

great story, got me so hard reading it. i got a thing about breast milk .

Amy:

Enjoyed your erotic story. Sensitive and believable. Keep writing; there are many of us that enjoy your stories.

Chuck

I don't usually go for incest stories, but this was really nice!

I haven't been cranking out submissions to LITEROTICA as industriously as you have AMY but one thing holds true for everyone that visits either to read or to contribute: we all have opinions. In the mixed up, entirely subjective world of sex what is and what isn't perverse is a question we can only answer independently. Incest-based stories like this, for example, can give a man a hard-on in this fictional arena while in reality the described behavior wouldn't be tolerated. You seem to like toying with the concepts of incest and as erotica goes its a major genre so by all means, continue. My only complaint--- hopefully nothing more offensive than the realm of constructive criticism--- is that while your ideas have fire the dialogue doesn't come across as something I can really "hear" people saying, the choice of verbage just doesn't quite...click. Other than that, I hope to see more work soon.

Such a tasty story. Sucking good.

The reason most of us read incest is to get an erection and enjoy sexual gratification. Your story did a good job of giving me that pleasure. I enjoed jacking my cock while I read about the father fucking his daughter. That's all I ask. Well done.

This was a very hot story, you write so well I enjoyed every moment. Since I have a lactation fetish it was great on all levels

i cum to this story time and time again. i'm a young, hot 24 yr old from indiana with a secret desire to fuck daddys. not mine, just others.. haha! this story always gets me worked into a tizzzy until i can't stand it. thank you so much!!!

that is such a nice story, it made me feel wet

truly understandable

My one criticism is that your story was too short. Everything happened so fast! I liked it, though. Breast milk, daughter helping daddy...I liked it.

I liked it, good job!

this has my pussy juices flowing love it

To Indiana 24 year old. Your comment made me cum. If your breasts start leaking, I would love to suck your milk and fuck you.

and to have the daughter ask ask want him!

Such pleasure at home and he had no idea it was available.

Write chapter 2 & 3. Get her pregnant again, this time with daddy's baby. He gets more breast milk.

I wholeheartedly agree with SamWarrens statement!!!!!!

tell us about the days that followed. She need it bad, he needs it bad. Let them enjoy each other and as we read we can enjoy them too

Awful. Slow down. Dialogue isn't believable. Who are these people? Write characters not cardboard cutouts. Masturbate before you start writing. It will help you write better.

SELFISH BITCH WIVES...HE SHOULD HAVE LEFT HER.....BUT THE BABY-MAKING SLUT DAUGHTER HOLDS HIM BACK!!

YOU ARE AN AWFUL WRITER

nice story ,ok writing need ch 2 dad ,daughter and baby leave