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A disturbing look at a world turned upside down, where folk find themselves imprisoned in their own homes.
listed in error...
...as erotic. Obviously it's about the blending-in of people with mental and emotional problems into the general population with inadequate assistance - hardly erotic.
:-)
Tess
I used
to work with the mentally ill, struck a chord with me.
Well developed, touching.
Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.
A different kind of prison.
World weary ~ he now sees things as they really are.
Definitely...
strikes a chord deep inside and makes one think how some people have to live out their lives. Very well done, thanks.
Reminds me of a movie
A movie titled King of Hearts
makes you wonder who are the crazy ones, those who check out on their own so to speak or we who choose to remain in all the craziness that we have created etc...
either way a very thought provoking work
the problem
is your movie choices, I would have preferred a big Indian throwing a sink through the window, butcha can't have everything. Let's focus on one word "blood", explain. If this is an abandoned asylum, you have it twice, pardon the pun, overkill. the ending looks forced into a statement of significance. Excellent job, considering the audience. A "gifted" 5.
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