All Comments on 'The Pretend Sophisticate'

This was a most interesting story of a fellow with very modest means who runs a erotic scam by pretending he's wealthy. Quite a good read - Well written plot wise.

The age of the mother and daughter don't match but the mom may have been youthful looking....not clear if he was fucking an underage girl.

Bond NEVER carried a .38 caliber Baretta and to my certain knowledge, Baretta has never built any automatics sized around the .38 cartridge. We are talking metric measured firearms. Baretta has produced several models using a .380 (9mm Short) which is NOT the same as .38 caliber. However, the Baretta pistol Bond employed in the first 5 Ian Fleming novels was a .25 Baretta; he was roundly criticized for carrying it in the novel Dr. No. He was ordered to upsize his service weapon in the same novel. In the majority of the Bond missions, our intrepid secret agent used a Walther PPK, sized for 7.65mm. Significantly improved stopping power and still very concealable.

Nice plot, could use a little more detail the story felt kind of rushed but otherwise enjoyable.

Pretty good read, but it would have been even better if he'd stripped and used the mother a bit. She could have sucked him after he came in her daughter and he could have double teamed both for a really rousing finale. Still, a good plot overall.

he should've taken the 18 yr old with him *smirk*

That makes five I've read and each one is better than the last. Theres a problem in this category: At what point does the use of force constitute "rape"? Here it obviously does not. Good job!

STORY WAS INTERESTING

Only he stripped my mother down as well. He stuck around all night and took turns fuckin our pussies, asses, tits and mouths. The bastard was very skilled too, mother I lost count on how many orgasms he subjected us to. He video tape the whole thing which included getting us to ear each other senseless. He left us tied cunt to cunt with an insidious vibrating double dildo we couldn't help but to fuck each other on. Our arms were tied behind our backs exposing us. After he left he waited 12 hours to call it in but he did it as a bomb threat. We came and came as the bomb squad took another 6 hours to figure out he was bluffing and their was never a bomb. All while they watched us climax again and again. I sell real eastate now. Mother and I have been disappointed he never came back for an encore. And no other clients were ever so bold. I have to be the aggressor as does mother.