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Very well done story of life and what is important
I found this a great story of a peace we all need to find in ourselves before we can share our love. No one is in charge of your happiness except you. Remember that all the really matters in the end for us is, we shared our love.
Well done piece of writing and good entertainment.
Thank You
PT
Wow!
Jack,
When you want to hammer the emotions you don't swing a small one. Was that a 20 pound sledge? What a story of tragedy and recovery!
I have to get the tissues before
I start one of you stories, Jackson. You really get the emotions going, Joan. The thing is, I feel good when I finish one of your pieces. I like that, Jason. (How confusing would it be if Blue wrote a story about you?)
Jack
What can I say.......what superlatives can I muster? Fantastic, sweet, loving, touching.......well, you got the idea. Thank you for writing.
And KDH, uhhhh, DKH, uhhhhh, HDK, maybe my next one will be about you, LOL.
Where's the tissue box?
I can't find it underwater. There you go. You've done it again. Don't stop doing it. Made my day. Thanks so much.
Again, I have to say I enjoyed reading about the way real people would do real things.
Phil
Why I Read!
This is a real story about real people you can care about! Thanks for writting it!
Great job
Excellent.
Beautiful Story
Thanks for a very beautiful story.
A very good, heart-warming story!
A very loving story. He's lucky there was an Angie around to love him. Without her he would have been jumping from some bridge. Depression can really be debilitating. He was brought back to a happy and loving family and learned to live again.
Very good read.
As always a beautiful story well written. 15 months after the ending of a long unhappy marriage your stories give me hope. About the song, John Lennon rated it the best rock song ever. Thanks,
Brent
Great story. Thanks
GREAT PARAPHRASING
GOOD WRITING TO USE THE WORDS OF THE SONG TO FOLLOW THE STORY. TK U MLJ LV NV
One of my favorite stories on the site.
Balanced, provocative, endearing, humble. Loved it.
Beautiful -
You do an incredible job with these song lyrics -
Every time it is such a pleasure to read the story attached to them - it is as if you wrote the lyrics for the story not the other way round - lol.
#2 IF LIFE IMITATES ART
it sure copies the lyrics, TK U MLJ,LV NV
Good Read***
Thanks for sharing.
I must be a sentimental old fool, why else would my eyes be tearing up and my nose running? Thankyou for a good story that didn't need any sex.
Nothing & Everything
Nothing to dislike, everything to love. Well crafted, poignant, heart rending and life reaffirming. Much like a storm with darkness, destruction and pain giving way to mornings light with the calm of hope and joy of life.
Thank You Very Much
Morgan DeWolfe
Wow!
Thank you. tom anon
Good story
and excellent interpretation of the song
touching
warm
romantic
and darn hard to read because of my allergies
It is a great story -
The emotions are intense, from deep sadness to joy and happiness.
The only bad part is knowing it will be several days before I will get the songs out of my head.
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THE SONG IS A CLASSIC
this plot to the lyrics, not so much. TK U MLJ LV NV
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