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This sounds so very familiar. Did you do this earlier as a straight nonerotic poem? If so, let me just add that with that out-of-focus photo, the words have much greater impact.
reminds me
of the "road less traveled". It has a wistful, wanting quality to it, as if to say, what if...
Tess, your muse is on your shoulder now, whispering into your ear. I am somewhat jealous ;)
delicate
The feeling of watching a Loved One walking out of our sight was never described better. A delicate beautiful rendering.
Beautifully...
described..thanks.
talk about missing the boat
whoever this might or might not be about, boy did he miss the boat so to speak.
The last verse is the killer for me, she just goes on being her and he has to wonder what he passed on...
or at least that's my take on it.
Your use of simple every day things makes it all very profound in that it has a realism and connects to the reader.
Maybe tears?
It's a wonderful flawless combination of romantic text with a hint of concrete poem (the speaking voice changes from the man to the woman just at the bent on the road). The photo for me reflects the confusion and at least the temporary loss of focus we experience when we go through transition between places or relations. Only time will tell what we'll each see when we each refocus our vision at the end of the road.
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