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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The passions of love and lust imposing such contradictory feelings of wants and needs.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Contentment.

A magic place ~ a woman sexually excited but at complete peace with herself.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
I felt secondary

I believed you, yet as a poem it was missing. It was too much on the level of generalizations. See most adjectives: I feel happy does not cut it. Happy how? Its supposed to be an intimate poem.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Arousal...

at its finest

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Erotic Poetry: I have a selection here on Literotica and you can now purchase a book of my erotic poetry at https://www.amazon.com/dp/1545534020/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1493049857&sr=1-1&keywords=Naked+Soul%3A+Poetry+to+keep+you+up+at+night Erotic Short stories: Some ...