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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/13/07

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The passions of love and lust imposing such contradictory feelings of wants and needs.

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by duddle14601/14/07

Contentment.

A magic place ~ a woman sexually excited but at complete peace with herself.

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by KOLKORE01/14/07

I felt secondary

I believed you, yet as a poem it was missing. It was too much on the level of generalizations. See most adjectives: I feel happy does not cut it. Happy how? Its supposed to be an intimate poem.

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by Amyfriend01/18/07

Arousal...

at its finest

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