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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/15/07

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The image and the sentiments expressed seem different from the earlier you; I like these changes.

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by duddle14601/15/07

city life.

City life with all it's crime and inconvenience ~ still a desirable place to be.

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by Amyfriend01/16/07

The city....beehive of activity

the hub for all vices..

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by jushorny04/07/08

Like the Illustration

Of course, the poem, the visual with words is great, but the illustration is as well

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by tazz31701/14/12

THE BLOCK HAS CHANGED

the alley not., TK U MLJ LV NV

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