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Maid Paid to Slay

byPirate Tregare©
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by Anonymous

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by dreamcatcher701/25/07

brilliant

that was good, loved the twist. Thankyou

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by Amyfriend01/25/07

Terrific plot....

Fantastic ending...what else can I say....besides excellent...and whatever became of the maid..haha.

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by rachlou01/25/07

laughing as I type!

That was so funny! Loved the twist at the end - caught me by surprise absolutely. Was excellent, thanks for the laugh!

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by Anonymous01/25/07

DAYUM Funny and original....

DAMN funny and original

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by hansbwl01/25/07

A laughter a day.

You have made my day, thank you.

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by Anonymous01/25/07

Nice, but old

Very well written, but it is an OLD joke.

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by duddle14601/25/07

Still funny.

This may be an old time-worn joke but the way this story is written it's still quite amusing.

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by Anonymous01/26/07

OMG LOL

OMG I laughed till I had tears leaking out of my eyes !!

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by Alvaron5301/26/07

Loved it

Very twisted and dark ending. Thank you for a great belly laugh.

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by archetype04/06/08

Muy Bien

Loved it. I don't care if it was an old theme, it was cleverly worked into the erotica genre.

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by Anonymous04/06/13

Wow

That ruined my day.

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