nice I liked it
Please finish it!!!
I am loving this and need to read more and soon, so please please can we have more.
I think you should give her a chance to live. Only 16 and already she has experienced so much despair and hopelessness. If turned she would have a chance to live her life even in death. But also she is still young enough to have hope, so if she died she would be redeemed.
Geave her a chanins I think she wheel bring lite in to his life(figertivly ofcors)And make his life bairab.
I love it. Not many people can pull off having a story up here that has absolutely no sex but is still very Heart racing.Although as the story progresses it seems like ti will be more of a romance the only thing being NON-Human about it being that he is a Vampire but still a very wonderful work of art!!!!!
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