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whats gonna happen next?
It was good. I am hoping for a happy ending.
gripping
and fascinating. I can't wait to hear what happens next. Keep them coming, please!
very good so far
I keep waiting for the rest.I can hardly wait to find out what happens next..hoping for a happy ending.
Great first effort
This is an interesting concept.
I hope you get to feeling better soon so we can all see where this is going.
Keep up the good work!
Molly
where's the ending?
Why have you never finished this story? Its been more than a year!!
Well done! Keep going!
I'm really enjoying your story... you have a fun, mystical style, though tend to drag on your sentences to the point that I forget what the beginning of it was about! I'm a bit surprised that you've turned Sarah so... evil, I suppose, but I look forward to seein gwhat you do with the rest of the plot!
why stop?
loved it, please finish it
Please continue
This story has completely captured my attention. Please finish the story. I anxiously await. It's really great.
Please Please Please
Please finish this story....you can't just leave us hanging for years on end, we have to know what happens!!!
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