All Comments on 'Don't Speak'

as bad as it can get. if I wanna watch clockwork orange, I go and rent the movie

Don't Write, if your writing is nothing more than a collection of poor examples of dominance bordering on rape in what seems to be the aftermath of a more romantic affair.

Lot's of trite scenes from a lot of better done but similar stories.

It was not bad and you should not quit writing! I liked it. Thanks for sharing.

It was really well done, lots of detail, just needs to be a little longer. Can't wait to see more.

but it is certainly not the worst. Write on.

Good first story. Keep writing.

You just need more detail, thoughts, emotions. But good first try

I thought you did a fantastic job. It certainly turned me on. I hope you will write another one and tell us what happens with penny and Jamie...Thanks for a great story. keep up the good work.

i think if this is your first story it was great one! It certainly turned me on and i thought the ending was cute! =] Great balance between dominance and romance